| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 07:59 PST
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Yes! Finally! Finally, it has happened, finally Mutsumi got what she derserved! Naru is lucky that mutsumi is protecting her, otherwise, she wouldn't be in very good shape...excellent chapter! No wrath, simply becasue you made Mutsumi so happy! Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to do the "Mutsumi finally got some lovin' dance" *Runs off to do. and get all his minoins to do so as well*
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Alpha Zulu On: January 21, 2006 05:09 PST
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Welcome back! Nice chapter, and good set-up for the Naru issue to boot!
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 23:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excelent chapter. I laughed when Shinobu called Su "Washu-chan". I'm a huge Tenchi Muyo fan, and that was a great tie-in. Hopefully Mutsumi won't have too much of a bruise. We all know Keitaro is virtually indestructable, but I'm pretty sure Mutsumi isn't. Hopefully everything gets patched up between Naru and Keitaro, though Naru definatly didn't make it easy by hitting Mutsumi. Oh well. Good luck with your next chapter, I can't wait to read it.
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Title: Ch.8
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: January 20, 2006 22:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great to hear from you again and this chapter was just what I was looking for. It can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: sephiorth_jtp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 14:29 PST
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all i can say is woooooow lol i love motoko even more now this was an awsome read onegai make another chapter soon
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Title: im in love
Reviewed By: shadowdragonking666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 08:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply amazing...THIS IS FREAKING GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 22:26 PST
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Ah yes something I forgot... I will send Crono and a team of borrowed Hunters, Elites, Brutes, Scorpion tanks, and a Covenant armada of 150-300 ships as well as my own personal army to the demention your fic is based in with express orders to destroy every thing in their path and afterward glass the planet. And no I will not die. The time limit I set for this attack is 8 weeks... That is all.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 22:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So after who knows how long you decide to update... oh well.Also update soon ok?
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Reviewed By: Emperor Jaden On: December 14, 2005 10:53 PST
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*Claps* Well, about time! *Calls back his elite forces, who were just about to move out* Very good! i loved how Motoko acted, protecting Keitaro, was abosuluetly wonderful! no wrath this time, since this was so good, and i will wait at least*Thinks*4 weeks until wrath, since you are having real life diffuculties..i know all about those *Nods sadly*...Oh! and be sure to tell us where you got the chibi Mutsumi wallpaper from!...and she better not be that hurt! and sorry for not logging in for this, in a big rush!
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 22:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. You're definatly "fleshing out" the characters, in more ways than one, and it seems to be working well. Would it be possible to link us to the chibi Mutsumi wallpaper you said about? Thanks. keep up the good work.
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Title: *Cheers*
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 14:04 PST
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*Clap Clap Clap* Awesome! You hadn't updated in a bit and was starting to get a touch concerned...but hey, good things are worth waiting for. It's good to see that you're not leaving out the characters and are trying to tie everything together. A part involving Su, Shinobu, and the "birds and bees" is guaranteed to be interesting - especially coming from you. The scene with Otohime and Narusegawa was awesome, and opens up quite a few possiblities for the future, can't wait to see what will come of this event. Again, your style and spelling/grammar are superb. Anyone who is reading this and is not entertained must be a basketcase. Anyways, cheers to you, keep up the awesome work! Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. I hope to more of this good story soon.
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Title: I
Reviewed By: GAdoury8477 On: December 13, 2005 12:38 PST
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Great story I love it. Keep up the good work. Are you gonna end it with KEitaro chooseing someone? if so make it Motoko she deserves him.
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Title: ch.7
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 09:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and the story is starting to look like a lot of fun. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Psychlone(too lazy to log in) On: December 12, 2005 18:38 PST
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pure genious again, i love it, but to my dismay, you made naru the baf guy/girl in this chapter, was that intentional?
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