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Title: Long time, no re-read...up to Demon's Gate on re-read #...um 4? 5? Um...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2019 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, Fennie! You probably don't remember me from about a
decade or so back, but I just HAD to re-read this FAHHHHHbulussssss
work of art!! This fic deserves LEGENDARY and downright VIRAL
status, IMHO!!! The characters are so real and raw and just...um...
**searching Thesaurus.com for cool enough words...and failing,
UTTERLY** As a tried-my-best-but-fell-short fiction writer, it was
cathartic to see 'plot done WELL' and, again, I thank you for this
wonderful, thought-provoking, funny, ANGSTY-to-the-NTH power, MADLY
engaging take on one of my FAVORITE long-running anime, InuYasha. I
read ALL your author notes and really felt your dedication to your
audience as you juggled life and all its happy times and hiccups.
Every chapter felt lije a labor of love and a gift shared and, as I
battled depression and sickness, these chapters (and your cool
Oneshots) really took some of the sting out of my day. Thanks,
again, Fennie! KUTGW! ALSO, if you EVER consider an AR riff on
Naruto/Shippuuden (sp?), I am SO there!! This fic will NEVER die
for me and you have a FOREVER Fangirl in li'l ole me! **bowing
humbly** and tossing out a few **Fangirl SQUEEEEEES**
-iloveaimecartoons
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2011 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been re-reading your story and my pathetic number of reviews. The fact that I was going through a painful bout with a tumor, surgery, and resulting screw-ups with my seizure meds is obvious from the things I missed and from the lack of reviews. This is still my all-time favorite inu/kag fic. Only recently have I had access to adequate dosage of seizure medicine and as soon as my move is complete, you will get the reviews you deserve. It is going to take a long time to cover the entire story, but that is what I plan. Thank you, your beta's, and your supporters for such a wonderful epic. I wish I knew something about Final Fantasy. If I did, I'm sure you'd give me one helluva ride. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story! You did a wonderful job of keeping with the original story and yet making it your own. I loved reading about how much the characters had changed in 500 years. You did a great job of making sure they were different and yet still the same all at once. I was impressed with all the detail you put into writing this. I hope you will continue writing. |
Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 07:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I haven't read this story sooner! This is definitely going into my "fanfictions I read all the time" list. This story was AMAZING from start to finish. I loved it. LOVED IT.
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this was GREAT!!! I finially finished it and i wasn't disappointed. your a great writer with a good attention to details. i hope u write more stories! maybe one about Rin and Sess! hing hint lol
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 21:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't really say much 'very nice'. Well executed enjoyable read. The Seven was a bit of a long drag, but well done. :)
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I finally got around to finishing it lol, it was absolutely amazing as is your writing. Sorry it took my soooo long but work has been extremely hectic =] This is definitely and fave of mine now =]
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Title: just stumbled in
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story thus far.... I only paused long enough to type this up As for the Sess/Kag comment in the last chapter, I completely understand.... after her and Yash mate she will be his sister so he would in fact have respect for her as well as some form of affection. Off to actually read this chapter and the ones after it =]
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Title: Award Nominations
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 01:45 PST
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Congratulations Fenikkusuken - your stories have been nominated at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008: The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse for Best Completed Serial One Hundred Thousand Lifetimes for Best Canon and Best Oneshot Revelation for Best Comedy, Best Lemon, and Best Oneshot This is only the first step in the process though - all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at http://inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions - their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! FlameTwirler
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 15:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my question to myself it: HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THIS FOR SO LONG?!?! Excellently, excellent fiction. I've always been a fan of girls who kick major ass so your Kagome is officially my hero for life. Not only was your canon believable and original it also stayed true to the core of the InuYasha story. I've spent the last week reading this and I'm pissed that it's over. Reread time!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 12:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fic was sooo awesome! i loved itXD one of the best ive read=D actually to be honest...i saw this fic a couple months ago... and was like...is this one of those kagome in the future ype fics so i just scrapped the idea of reading it...then like a couple weeks ago i saw it again and decided to read the first chapter cuz all your reviews were sooo good and you had alot of views....i have to say...i loved it form the very beginning=D i couldnt get off the computer! and i had a lot of hw at the time too=D just finished it yesterday=D so kawaiiiXD i read it like nonstop...you have really good talent..just wondering...are you gonna make a sequel? cuz i keep imagining diff scenarios in my head for sequelsXD lol just means i love it so much that i want moreXP
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Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 03:36 PDT
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Moving, I was immensely impressed by this fiction, so much so I took two days off university to finish it :) But anyways I loved the ending yet I was saddened by Kagomes loss of power in sorts Ohh well I'll just have to get used to it... Thank you for this
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Reviewed By: God Amongst Mere Mortals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I have to say Fenik, I have read just about all of your competition. The purities, chronicles, lucky ones, the extended mating season, heart's landfill... well and just about any other high caliber Inufic you could name. This one still impresses me the most. By far it is superior with its AU setting twist and the characters are well developed. Besides the shear tenacity you have shown at the length this thing is is truly remarkable. Good job! I always look to this fic whenever I feel stuck on my own! I'm trying one Continuation/Divergence fic and one AU with mecha/ scifi themes. I hope I can be 1/5 as successful as you have been. TY for the amazingness, and I would very much like feedback on my fic some time from you! Message me since I don't solicit other fics in reviews XP
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best stories I've read! And you finished it! You did a wonderfull job!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 02:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amzing... it took me forever to read it, but wow.... that has to be one of the best stories i have ever read... i loved it... kagome was so strong and powerful.... i loved how you switch from one time to the next... and i loved yashita... some of my favorite moments were with him... you did a great job in recapping the anime.. i loved this story... i hope you continue to write so that there will be more great stories like this to come!!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 03:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap, that was amazing!!! I actually enjoyed that more than the real anime!!! I am quite impressed, that must have been the best, longest, and most fulfilling fanfic I've ever read, and as son as I'm done writing this, I'm going to go back and re-read all my favorite parts. I love how you made Kagome so strong, and some of my favoite chapters were of Yash in the future, longing for her so much, yet having to let her go. And then the angst at the end!!!! GAH!!! I hope they named the little guy Fenik. I don't think it's a lame-ass name at all, especially since he flippin' fell for Midoriko!!! NEVER saw that coming!!! well, anyway, best fanfic in existance, hope you're going to keep writing epics like this, I bow to your greatness, and all that jazz. JA!
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Title: The Phoenix Blade
Reviewed By: Fenik Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fennie, I know I've said it before, but what a truly amazing story. Congratulations!!!!!!! I really enjoyed the military aspect of the story, being a one time military brat myself, I found certain aspects very satisfying and also very sad and all too real. I thought Kagome's characterization was amazing throughout the story, and the introduction of some wonderful OCC (especially one particular tufty-eared bishie with the striped hair. Like some of my favorite "dog eared" novels resting on my nightstand "The Phoenix Blade will also reside. I'm looking forward to some one-shots that will hopefully include fenik, maybe something more on his origin and creation. I'm off to Maui for a brief respite, if I find anything on the beach that resembles your bishie eared, amazingly stripped Fenik I let you know. I Love Happy Endings! Warm Regards, Carol
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope that you can bring out the sequels that you promise your fans. In particularly Exchange. As you can guess I am a huge Rin/Sess fan and enjoyed reading Exchange as well. Looking forward to reading more of your great works.
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Title: CHAPTER 75 PART II
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 07:05 PDT
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You portrayed Jakotsu exactly how I see him. He's such a violent perv. As always, your description of the massacre was excellent. Gasp! You killed Inu's! Evil you! [snffle] The fact that their mates dropped dead was so awful. And then they were melted! Sesshoumaru can't save them! You are more than evil! I know that there has to be casualties, but…but…[sobs] At least you kept Kumo from rushing in and getting itself (can't remember if it is a he or she) killed. Mukotsu is downright creepy. Little bastard. Oooh, you are so good at making me hate these bastards. Oh yeah. I mentioned in an lj reply that you have been able to make me hate Naraku more than any other author. We'll get to what he deserves later, after other screaming events. I'm looking forward to re-reading the next events. Yeah, I have done some reading on these before, but it didn't really stick because of going through med dosage changes. It all fell through holes. That's probably why I didn't remember the scene with Koga and Ayame. Okay, now I'm ready to go on to the next few scenes! Or maybe I'll go back and re-familiarize myself with the individual Tenbaryu's. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 05:55 PDT
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Oh god...right=write...I'm at work and in a hurry. Sorry.
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Title: CHAPTER 75
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 05:53 PDT
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I lost my place and went back a few chapters, but that's okay because 75 was a great chapter. Kouga's respectful treatment of the wolf taiyoukai showed a more formal side of him, adding to his character. You've done a great job making the characters three dimensional. The interactions between Kouga & Ayame were very sweet and a good lead-in for a relationship between the two. I loved that 'no trace of stinking dog'. Then there was the howl for the dead. [sniffle] It is wonderful to see Ginta and Hakkaku as more than just side-kicks. Their discussion concerning Kouga making them run around was funny. "Is Naraku dead?"…"No."…"There's your answer" LOL Kohire is one of the characters that I need to research. I don't remember him well. However, I loved the conversation in which Kagome points out that he would probably have a "shortened life expectancy" should he point out the connection Kouga has with both humans claimed by two Inu brothers. LOL That was great. There are so many small humorous phrases and I appreciate you adding some lighthearted banter. It's refreshing. One line is: "A set of walkie-talkies would sure come in handy…" I'm not sure that you intended humor, but it's there. ^_^ As always, the fight scenes with Kokotsu and Jakotsu were well done. It broke my heart when the Inu guards were killed. [sniffle] There are so many details that round out what is in the manga. You make it like a novel instead of a comic book. I could right a chapter sized review on a chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:33 PDT
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Damn, I've finally finished it (took me long enough). I have to say you had me drowning in that river of agnst enough that I cried more than I have in the past month. Still I loved the ending. Amazing job, this is by far THE BEST Inuyasha fanfiction I've ever read (considering that's about all I spend my time doing...). Thank you for sharing this tale with us. Congradulations, I can't wait to read more of your stories.
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Title: Ch 84-Epi
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I feared the ending of this most wonderous tale, I am sooo glad I finally sucked it up & dove in. The emotion of the final 2 chapters was overwhelming, and the sweetness of the epi soothed my heart. You did a remarkable job dealing with Kags' PTSD. Momijii to the resuce! Kag's had to be in a setting as close to the past as possible to deal with & get passed the past (makes sense?). It did not feel rushed as long as you keep in mind what a remarkable person Kags is. The note left with her bike in storage lightened the gloomy clouds, and I knew she & Yashita would be ok. Their reunion at the grave sites was a nice walk down memory lane. Such a great idea to have Kags retrek her journey to lead her to her future. I am going to thoroughly enjoy rereading this gem for years to come! Heck, I did that several times over the past 3 years, and always managed to pick up something I glossed over the previous read. This was truely a great & wonderous take on the InuYasha world. Poke & prod them dang bunnies for some fill in stories for the years between the well closing & Kags final return! No, really, I mean it! Would Elmer Fudd help in getting them bunnies in line? LOL! Thank you again for sharing your brilliance!! I hope you will continue to put your 'Feni' spin on the IY universe!
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Title: CHAPTER 79
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 08:14 PDT
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You work miracles with battle scenes. They are fast, exciting and I can see them in my head. You also make the characters real. This whole chapter felt alive and went by too quickly. ^_^ Loved it. I think I'm starting to really like Kouga. Your portrayals do all of the characters justice. This was a kick ass chapter! ^_^ Off to read more! I will tell you that I have re-read some of your earlier chapters several times over. My favorites were the snake battle (so angsty afterward), Sesshoumaru's interrogation of Kagome and the battle in the keep. I loved Inu and Sess's budding relationship and the fact that Inu had been protected while growing up. [sniffle] Those are at the top of my list of many things that I like about this fic. Off to read more of the band of seven. Oh, I very much like your version of Bankotsu and Jakotsu. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: The Rabid Bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 14:41 PDT
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I love the way you ended it!! Superb!!! I have been reading this fic for some months now, and I just want to say that I love all of your work. You are a masterfull writer, and I can't wait to see what you do next. It is quite saddening, though, that this fic, as well as the InuYasha manga have ended. No...it's really sad. Oh, well, see you in your next fic.
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 02:28 PDT
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So Fenik will be the kid's name huh? :)) i got a bit misty eyed at the end, honestly... we're trying to have a baby too, hopefully we're gonna make it :) Well, Fenik, congratulations for completing this incredible work, congratulations for all the awards you have ever won, and congratulations for all your hard work and dedication and beautiful style.. and thank you very much! ^hugzzz^
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Title: Waaa!
Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have totally made me sad and satisfied with the conclusion of this full-length fic. Now what are you going to do with yourself and all the free time you have acquired? You are an awe-inspiring author and don't let this be the end!
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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutly perfect! I love a good ending :) I have enjoyed this fic so much. Thank you for sharing it. I had a thought - I'd love to see how Rin and Sesshomaru and Koga and Ayame got together. Could there be possible one-shots in the future? Thanks again for such a wonderful emotional rollercoaster of a story. now I'm gonna go and start it all over again ;)
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