| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
| Pages (31): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: Bratney [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 14:30 PST
Comment/Review:
you've got to get anothe chapter up. question for u.. you make these very close to the manga?
|
Title: Finally yet unfortunately....
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fianlly caught up with everyone else....and you know what...Im sad. I dont want to wait!! I really hope that you will update this soon! You are an absolutely wonderful writer. But for you and the sake of reality... I think I will kindly be patient for you. Hope to hear from you real soon!!!
|
Title: LoVe YoU!!!!! ; )
Reviewed By: mocahoney [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love you I've been here from the beginning and I'm sorry but this is my first review. i feel bad because I feel I should have shown WAY more support. I have your RSS feed on my desktop so I checkin everyday and much to my emotional stability I find you haven't updated yet. I await your next chapter and I am holding my breath. mabey if I badger you and act like the spoiled child you have made me with this incredible inticing don't stop reading until you fall asleep on you laptop kind of story. i honestly want to thank you and I hope you get alot of more attention from this wonderful fic. I have already sent out a mass alert on yahoo. Inuyasha lovers about you because your the kind of writer we adore. I appreciate your skill AND PLEASE NEVER FORGET THAT!! I thank you and hope you finish the fic. I have seen people drop off and stop a story from writer's block and I personally have cried because of it. I want you to know even is you don't finish i will still keep a copy of my Greatest Fics Of All Time folder on my PC because you have been a incredible writer. I LOVE YOU FOR THIS FIC!!!!! Mocahoney Your adoring fan.
|
Title: On Edge
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am having the time of my life reading this fic. And I am so glad that YOU of all people have written it. I honestly don't think no one could have done a better job. You were made to write this fic. It's intricately detailed... It's colorful and vivid, it's mind blowing and intense, it makes you laugh, it makes you cry, it makes you wanna throw your own man in bed and ride him just like that motorycycle. (Well me anyways ^_^ *blush*) This fic has me sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what in the hell is going to happen next. But I will admit... I am kinda sad and a little hesitant to finally see the outcome of this story. Though it seems pretty apparent that our beloved hanyou and miko wins the battle against Naraku... How on earth will Kagome cope with being seperated from the Sengoku Judai InuYasha??? That's really hard... and will he have to go through what he went through once before? Waiting five hundred years all over again while the older InuYasha aka Yashita lives on in pure bliss with the woman that he loves?? I mean I know that they are one in the same but... can't there be someway where the pup doesn't have to suffer??? Like Kagome's new powers or Madoriko or maybe event the finally completed purified jewel shard allow for the pup and Yashita merge together as one so that Kagome doesn't have to go through with the hurt and pain of knowing that the hanyou--pup (yes even though it is the same hanyou) she knows and loves is stuck on the other side. Tormented with grief because he lost the one he loves. And now as to wait unknowingly 500 hundred years and wait for the rest of the world that he lives in to play catch up???? At this rate if this all keeps up... our poor hanyou will never live out his life completely!!!! *whew* I don't know... all I know is that I am damned curious and scared all at the same time to find out the outcome of this fic. It's just so wonderful and I promise you that I read this fic faithfully...(every single day, night and chance that I get) I haven't read my other favorite fics... all because this one is at the top of my priority list as my current favorites...You know your fic is very awe-inspiring and makes me want to finish my own neglected fics... (mainly Let It Burn and InuYasha: The Forbidden Chapters AND What You See May Not Always Be... lol, might a well be all of 'em)... but unfortunately I no longer have Microsoft Word anymore (only Note Pad and Rich Text...damned viruses and the damned Best Buy Geek Squad who erased it) *shakes fist furiously* so when I upload my fic onto here... it's a jumbled mess. *sigh* Oh well I'll get around to it sometime soon to fix that problem. I guess I have taken up a quite a bit of your time. And I need to once again... step down off of my soapbox. But if you do have the time, do you think you could email me??? There's quite a few topics that I would love to talk to you about via email, if you don't mind. Until then... I read on. Your Faithful Reader, Tusuke Kounami
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 07:39 PST
Comment/Review:
So are you gonna bring in the buried monk? Will Kikyo absolve him and lower the barrier? Or do you have another approach in mind? Sitting on pins and needles here, try not to take too long? But at least I got a nice long chapter to tide me over until the next. Yay!
|
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 04:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter i can't wait to see where it's going.
|
Title: Old Fashioned Love Song
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 12:14 PST
Comment/Review:
Awww, ya got me on the Three Dog Night thing. When I read that, I got this image flash of Sessh, IY & Fenik singing Karaoke to "Road to Shambala" with the "Awwoooooaaa, yeah, yeah, yeah" and everything. *snicker* Thanks a lot, that's gonna be in my head all frickin' day!
|
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I love the smell of destruction in the morning…" Oh so do I! Lol. And I think of all the bad guys Inu has come up against, I like Bank the best. Interesting thing with the combing of the auras there, and Inu feeling dirty, lol. But also brings to mind that its coming to an end soon, and you can almost feel like in the way Kagome talks, the dread, and she knows it. Ah, I love visuals. Most excellent. Update when ya can! ;)
|
Title: Chapter 78
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 15:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for that original interlude with Kikyo. I'm hardcore Inu/Kag, but I think there's room in the anime for Kikyo too. Now that you mention it, no one did mention what happened to her. Hm, maybe Kikyo's alive somewhere still...interesting.
|
Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 13:03 PST
Comment/Review:
"Inuyasha would be a 200 year old human." I have never thought of that aspect at all. My goddess, Kikyo's reaction to that was so... callous, and yet so... sad. She must know how much of the emotional spectrum she's lacking, must know her view of things are more open for hate than love, death than life. I was somewhat a Kikyo-hater once, but fictions almost equal to this opened my eyes to see beyond what was obvious and stated. However, Kagome will remain my idol, in this fic especially! I am grateful for your generosity in letting us read such a high quality story for free!
|
Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 12:50 PST
Comment/Review:
You're the 5th author with comments so interesting, I actually take the time to read them and actually considered doing a copy and paste to have something to read and laugh at on long car or bus rides. Just goes to show that lots of folks see your talent shining brightly! That's it. Seriously this time. Shutting up now. Really....
|
Title: Have I ever told you I love you, Feni?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 12:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cuz I DO! This fic is friggin' FABULOUS! I've reread it 2 or 3 times and it keeps getting better! There are too many points to ponder at the moment (and I have chapter to get to my Beta) but I will say these Band of 7 chaps are so awesome, intense and angsty that I'm buggin' over here! I'm in no rush to see this end, though I know it's coming...the travesty of it all! Hold me! Where will I get my $20 words from when you're gone? You have officially increased my word power, Feni. **sniffle** I don't WANNA go back to Thesaurus.com! You're my cheat sheet, dag nabbit! I'm sorry...give me a moment... **takes a moment to collect self** Whew, that was cleansing! Anywho, I can't wait to read this chapter and see what happens with Miss Clay and her reincarnation THIS time! Oh, those last 2 chapters were Angst-NATION! I nearly lost it when Inu snapped at Kagome and she lost it. Poor thing, with so much on her plate and her mate embarasses her like that in front of the Taiyoukai and the soldiers. I was pissed like it was REAL and all! I know, it's fiction, don't laugh at me, Feni. LOL! Okay, you can laugh a LITTLE...okay, that's enough. **sheepish grin** Oh, thanks also for all the tech advice and the welcome to LJ's IY community. It's always interesting whenever I go there. Okay, I'll hush now. Lata!
|
Title: Still Reading and Enjoying
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 03:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So here I am once again... chapters later to commend you on how intricately well written this fic is. I feel like I am actually sitting back and watching this episode to episode... and cannot wait until I see what happens next. I will continue to read on as I am already a self proclaimed faithful reader of yours...^_^ Until the next few chapters, Ja Ne!
|
Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 02:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be a quick review... I've had your story on my favorites list for quite some time now and I just now decided to take the time to read it... So far I am on chapter 6 and I have been up all night reading!!!! I am so excited by this story... I am dying to see what is going to happen next!!!! I will leave another review within the next few chapters...until then... Ja Ne!
|
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 08:01 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Part of me can't wait until this is over because I want to see how you finish it and another part doesn't ever want it to end since I want to be able to continue reading it for some time to come. I guess I will just have to re-read my favorite parts (most of it) whenever I need a "fix". But I am anxiously waiting, along with many others I am sure, to see how this wraps up and how Kagome survives.
|
| Pages (31): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
