| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:52 PDT
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i love it! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. I loved the meeting with Miroku! Since I didn't have a chance to review the previous chapter, I thought I'd do them both in one shot. *g* Great job as always, and I'm glad you didn't have Inuyasha and Kagome consummate their relationship at this point. I did miss seeing at least part of this sequence from Inuyasha's POV-- Kikyo's revival is a really major turning point in the Inuyasha saga--in the canon, it halts the IY/Kag relationship in its tracks while he tries to deal with his conflicted loyalties. In these latest chapter, IY seems to making a commitment to Kagome, but because there's nothing in his POV, we don't see his struggle or even his moment of decision, so the big foreplay scene seemed like it came too soon. Even with his replies to Kagome (good questions, smart girl!) there wasn't enough of a transition from Kagome's flirting with IY and her teasing of him to his sudden intention to take her as a mate. I'd love to see what was going on in his head between the time he kissed her post-Kikyo revival and the time he shows up in her bathroom. Just his remark that Kikyo tried to kill him twice isn't enough... Canon Kikyo presents a huge internal jeopardy in Takahashi's universe; in this story, we haven't seen enough of her to know what make of her. Her revived presence is kind of muted by having the Urasue incident happen in flashback via Kagome's POV. None the above is meant to lessen my admiration for what you're doing here...it's still a great story!
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 00:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great yet frustrating cliffie! I love this re-telling of the original story. OOC as they are, I can actually see Kagome and Inuyasha like this. Keep up the awesome work and I'm definitely looking foward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 17:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! I'm so happy he still wants Kagome! ^_^ I hope you update soon, because I'll go crazy if you don't, wondering what will happen! Hurry! lol
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 13:51 PDT
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Great way to stop the chapter! I cant believe that Inuyasha already wants Kagome as his mate..but i really do have one thing thats bothering me, if Inuyasha is still in the Feadual Era, and the instuctors are obviously Ship-dip, dog boy, and sesshy, how did they get in the Tokyo time? Well another great chapter, gotta be one of the best fics ive read!
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Title: Another addition
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 17:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter and another member joins our small band of shard hunters. Things are moving along quite nicely. I'm extrememly glad that you aren't regurgitating all the main story arcs because as a regular fanfic reader, these recountments of certain episodes or characters becomes quite repetitive after a while. On a different vein, Ship-dip, now that's a nick name that I've never heard before for Shippou. It'll take some time to get use to, just like Inu Yasha adding the 'chan' to Kagome's name, but much better than most pet names out there. I also have to thank you for replying to my first review, what a nice surprise that was. I hope you got my response since I sent it through my yahoo account rather than my hotmail account that you sent it to. Anyways, delightful chapter, especially with the slight squeeze of lime flavoring. Keep up the great writing, read from you soon. Ja!!!!
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Title: terrific story so far!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you only have 8 reviews? This is a terrific re-imagining of the Inuyasha story--I like tough-chick Kagome, and I'm intrigued to see how the present-day youkai tie into the Sengoku Jidai storyline. (I mean, it's pretty obvious who the present-day instructos *were* but how did they get from there to here...?) Very good writing, love the narrative voice, and you're doing an excellent job with the sexual tension between the two of them. It's a rather refreshing twist to see a Kagome who's comfortable with her sexuality, and an Inuyasha who's still the shy virgin hanyou of the series... great job! I'm really looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 06:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool its like...reliving the manga/anime lol, so then...this already happened and Kagome had her memory lost or something..? Or maybe Inuyasha or the sword of Kagome's made a wish on the Shikon Jewel that was 'make things the way they were before but with everyone in the feaudal era, with kagome's memory lost' lol or something like that. Well i love this story and i think i really do say that to much, haha love the way of Kagome's sarcasom! 'its small...or maybe it just doesnt get any bigger' haha..and the way Kagome is the 'chick with the sword' and the same Kagome as in the series is so...i dunno..stunning 2 me cuz u made her change, while still having the same kind of..i dunno feel to her, if Rumiko Takahashi made the story line like this i think it would be even better!! Please update soon, very good origanal story ^_^ Again: please update soon!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still gotta be one of the best stories I've read. You'll probably bring Kikyou back won't you..damn! I don't much care for her, but I suppose you'll bring her back anyways =-P please update soon, as I love this story!
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Title: Another chapter already!!
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:46 PDT
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Wooohooo, you're really puting the keyboard to good use and you'll hear no complaining from my direction. Entertaining chapter as usual. Inu has definitely staked his claim on Kagome considering that he's getting jealous over a horse, which by the way was a nice twist since her pink bike really isn't all that convenient in the past where smooth and well worn roads are few and far between. Not to mention that you ride a motorcycle, anything else with two wheels just doesn't cut it. Anyways, I like the hints about the purpose and history behind Kagome's katana...I'll have to definitely keep an eye out for how her sword comes into play. Until the next chapter. Ja!!!
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Title: best story ever
Reviewed By: Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just recently come across ur story and I read it and I just luv it. Even though the plot is sorta like the series it has its own uniquness (sp) aniway i really luv ur story and I hope u update soon!!
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Title: The Phoenix Blade
Reviewed By: ScorpionOcean [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 17:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't believe you have so few reviews on a wonderful story! People must not know that it exists. I can't wait for an update. I registered to MediaMiner just to leave you this review :)
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao! I loved it, that last line was the best. Please update ASAP!! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story! I absolutely love it..please update soon!!
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Title: The First of Many
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe this fic doesn't have any reviews yet. It certainly deserves any and all praise soon to come its way. I just have to say that you have a rather upbeat and highly enjoyable manner of writing, character portrayal, pacing, and plot development. The smooth blend and movement between the hightech realm and the historical era is absolutely delightful and refreshing to read. Although Inu Yasha's character can be somewhat OOC during his rather easy acceptance of Kagome initially, the verbal sparring and sexual under current between the two definitely compensates for the latter, entertainment wise at least. You have me anxiously waiting the next chapter in order to find out more about the Inu-tachi of the future and how everything will unfold for them. I'm truly looking forward to reading how you'll incorporate all the original story arcs into your fic. Until the next chapter, keep up the creative wheels turning and keyboard typing. Update ASAP, please and thank you!!!!
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