| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 05:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More give me more. Fantastic i love this story.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 16:30 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved all the affection that Inuyasha was getting....he deserves some lovin'! (LOL) Keep up the good work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 15:19 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it. Keeps getting better i've keep going back and reading it over again...I love chapter 70, .Can't wait till you update again!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 13:19 PST
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Chapter 70 is so great. I'm really enjoying getting to know the inuyokai characters. Nice touches of tenderness between both pairs too. I hope Gitoumaru is over Kagome enough that he isn't seeing her mother as a substitute. Somebody has GOT to do fanart of Inuyasha with the top knot and his father's kimono.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 02:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... interesting turn of events, it seems. After the horrendous battle with a nasty ass snake, Sess does things that even surprises himself. And I was wondering what Inu was going to do regarding his sword. Now, will Sess take it? Excellent Chapters. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I love the way you're making this your own. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: Love Kagome
Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 09:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your portrail of Kagome, I haven't had this much fun with a character with attitude in a long time. Most people who write her with an attitude write her with a huge chip on her shoulder, you however make her attitude fun yet down to earth. Thanks D
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 08:45 PST
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HE'S GIVING IT TO HIM???OMG!!!! loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 18:05 PST
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thank you for the new chappie! very good! I could actually hear the wheels in Sesshy's head running a mile a minute! Whew, InuYasha finally made it to the fortress, but where are Fenik and Midoriko??
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...a cliffie! *sighs happily* And such wonderful, intelligent use of vocabulary (not many fics out there using sybaritic, capacious, inherent, etc. correctly). *another happy sigh* I love a fic that keeps my left and right brain happy!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 11:30 PST
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Great chapter--loved the conversation between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, as Sesshoumaru begins to put the pieces together...
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Reviewed By: girlygirl138 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 13:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you leave me so sad!!! it's been days since you last updated... I love how it's all coming together. You can see the bond between Rin and Sesh growing too!
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Title: 2 Hot Inuyashas + 1 Warrior Princess = A Whole Lot of Lemony Goodness + Countless Plot Bunnies
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 00:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pfffft...Miroku's a salt lick! (ch. 58) Ok, now that THAT's out of the way... Great story! I love the whole "Inuyasha exists in the past and present" thing--always wondered how that would work out. I also love the subconscious thoughts (i.e. Inuyasha with demon side, Kagome with Fenik and Midoriko. Very original story line--sure, it's based off Takahashi's, but it is also entirely own. You brought everything together nicely and in your own timing, what with the complexities of Sesshomaru, court/army life and the emperor, Inuyasha's "inner demon", etc. I was very pleased with how you made Kagome a warrior instead of the helpless victim she ends up as in so many other stories. The only thing with Spelling/Grammar is some formatting issues in one chapter and the words running together in the bold titles. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 03:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Goodness!! That is the one of the best stories i've read so far..I can't wait until you update again Hopefully it soon.
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