| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 19:05 PST
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I love the way you twist this. And how you mix the tension, danger, angst and fluff so well. Every chapter is always jam-packed, a true roller coaster ride.
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Title: Chapter 80
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 12:32 PST
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Good chapter, a little dry though, but then I find a lot of fight sequences tend to be as such, including mine, so no biggie. It's interesting because its at this point my knowledge of the anime runs thin, so I'm gonna surprised from now on.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 20:13 PST
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lol love the end of chap 56. if the actual anime was naughty i imagine that that might actually happen.
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 06:44 PST
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oh ... srry that it takes so long now for me to read and review, life seems to have crawled right under my skin and it keeps issuing orders :P Anyway, you know all the lovely words i'm gonna say, i say them everytime :D, so this time i'm just gonna add, you are really good at writing action. It's what suits you best, trust me! so the last chapters have been a pleasure to read, and i cant wait for the next installments! Keep it up mate!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 05:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fabtastic chapter darlin' i lovbe the way your slowly getting evberyone to interact with each other as a pack - even Koga LOL.
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Reviewed By: Rain5605 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter... definetly perked up my day! Thanks for the update.^^
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 15:02 PST
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Silly, Ginta, of course he's not dead. Takes a lot more than that to kill Koga. He's too damn stubborn. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Cruel Intentions
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're cruelty knows no bounds....with each chapter you write, I come to respect you more; as a person and a writer. *sigh* How could you end the chapter like that...I'm in tears. *sigh* I guess you would like for your readers to come back so... I cannot blame you. On a different note I would really appreciate it if you took time out of your very busy schedule and read a new city based Inuyasha AU fic I have found... being the great writer you are, I am more than positive that it will be to your liking. It is called Heart's Landfill by Simonkal of Inuy. Please check it out when you have the time... I promise you will not be disappointed.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 19:21 PST
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"Prissy-sama"! Jakotsu certainly has the mot juste! "unless you'd like to hold the reigns, that is?" -- shouldn't that be "reins"?
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now we all know that Kouga doesn't die but it sure looks like that is becoming a grim possibility. I hope that Kagome isn't pregnant because the lose of child would kill her and Inuyasha. I liked how you merged the canon facts with your story and its development, it is very well done and well crafted. Part of me is anxiously awaiting the next chapter but part of me knows for you to maintain this level of excellence it takes time so I will wait patiently for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 15:13 PST
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I love your Jakotsu. He's creepy, in a fun sort of way. Kinda reminds me of RuPaul, except with a sword instead of just the catty attitude in his arsenal. Tsu & Kohire have the best personalities. Little flirts. The heroic saddle jump cracked me up. Just how does "Gersh" translate, anyway? Suppose it could mean just about anything from "Yes" to "Blow it out your kneecaps" to "Hey, hold still while I shell the ever-livin' crap out of you." I bet you had so much fun with that. And was that Banryu that Yash & Kogashu pulled out for the cadets? God, my head is spinning. Wonderful as always.
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 19:36 PST
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"C'mon, wolf-boy… show us what's under that cute little kilt!" Funny, but I've thought the same thing, many a time when I was watching the anime series... Another entertaining and action-packed chapter, and lots of good one-liners. I enjoyed it!
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Title: Ch 78 & 79
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I always thought Kikyo's desire for IY to be 100% human was totally selfish & would have backfired. While not a Kik-fan, I also thought she would have been smart enough to realize that the wish would not have been granted without some bizarre side effect. But, if she was that desperate to be a 'normal' woman, good sense could have flown out the window. Anywho...kinda ticked real life kept me from these chapters, but love being able to read 2 straight through! Not a fan of the Band of Seven Twits but I do enjoy your take on the. Are we there yet? *snicker* Ja-chan is a complete mess! I could totally see IY "lit up like Hanshin Stadium after a home run"! LOL!! I think I could also smell the crisped inu hair. I am so feeling the dread that is surrounding Kag's. Doesn't help to know you are an ebil, ebil woman! But shite, you are such an awesome author that I welcome it all with open arms. Thanks for the wonderful chapters!!
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Title: Chapter 79
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 17:38 PST
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I liked Fenik's line "Sweetheart, I'm just a figment of your imagination". Like in the Simpsons :D. "What should I do?" "I'm just your memory, I can't give you any new information". Fun. i also think your work with the band is spot on, Jakotsu creeps me out as much here as he did on the show, *shiver*. Interesting end too, I don't recall that in the anime...hm....
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 14:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story has been out for the longest, but it wasn't until recently that I have read it. I started sometime in January, and as of today I just finished reading the last chapter you posted. I waited until now to post a reveiw. It is simply amazing! I rarely read stories with more than 40 or 50 chapters because it can never hold my attention long enough. After chapter 10 or 15 I'm bored and the excitement from the 1st few chapters isn't there after that. Everytime I was finished with one chapter, I couldn't wait to read the next one. You truly are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more.
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