| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:19 PDT
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Gotta love Momiji. She's just such a wonderful character. So glad you didn't kill her off. *playfully glares* You know, I think I like the haircut. Pixie cuts are cute, and Kagome has the face shape to get away with it. Anyway, I thought it a small and nicely intriguing symbolic gesture. I am absolutely awed at how you cleaned house with these last few chapters. Oh, and Ita--or is it the bro--that's the Hawiaan shirt-wearing, golf cart riding slob? Nyurk! Talk about a fun visual! So where exactly is Sessh's private putting green? Ok, ok, sorry... I'm done now. One epilogue left, huh? Well, I thank you, Feni, from the bottom of my heart for a truly great story. So what's next?
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a chapter that was perfect. One more then it's over. I've loved every minute and the end is certainly as powerful and moving as this story has been through out. What a pleasure to read. An absolute treasure.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a chapter that was perfect. One more then it's over. I've loved every minute and the end is certainly as powerful and moving as this story has been through out. What a pleasure to read. An absolute treasure.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 10:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is that it?? It's been a GREAT story!!!!!
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Title: Brava
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful denoument to your epic tale--I like that you gave Kagome a chance to work through the results of all of her experiences, to make some decisions about her future. A very satisfying ending to a grand story--thank you for sharing this with us!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 07:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT CHAPTER FENIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohhh... you made me cry! Beautifully done sweetie, beautiful descriptions, it was like you can see and feel the places she travelled to. :sigh: First the end of the manga, now... we are closed to the end of this epic story... too much to handle. Think this of the best chapters, at least one of my favourites. No, not because she was reunited with IY, but because the way you managed her depression, her sadness, her healing... well all the process. Moreover, the descriptions were amazing!!! How she found her lost friends in each part she went to. Kikyo's resting place, her tribute to their child... Excellent job Fenik!!! CON-GRA-TU-LA-TIONS!!! Amazing chapter sweetie, truly moving!!! Thank you, thank you soooo much for this magnificent story and for this chapter in particular, and thank you so much :bows deeply: for sharing it with us!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theprophet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was good, hell the whole thing was good. Though i thought it was funny that no one considered Zoloft or Prozac to help Kagome get over depression. I was also a little disappointed when you took Kagome's powers away, o well, job well done.
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Title: This is the end, my only friend the end.
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 02:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could have kept reading this forever. I'm slowly getting over the ending of Inuyasha, with the help of fanfiction, so you probably understand why I'm sad to see this end so quick after the end of the only manga I've read start to finish. I hope you have another monster story waiting for time to be written, cause I just adore your style and even though the quickys are a real treat, I'm just a fool for big meaty stories. Until the rap up, thanks for writing such a juicy story.
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Reviewed By: ReiVin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 01:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried from beginning to end. Oh god! I'm so sad that its almost come to an end. Fanfics like this are rare and far in between. I will forever love this story as I will come back every few months and dedicate an entire day or two to sit infront of my screen and relive their adventures and the emotions that come from reading this awesome fanfic! I love the fact that Kagome got to escape and heal. I really hated having to read through her experience coming back from the last battle. But thats how real life is though. The goods with the downs. I cant wait to read the last chapter. You made my day! Thank you!
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Title: Chapter 85
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 01:20 PDT
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A long chapter, it's 4:20 am where I am now. An awesome chapter with a hot lemon ending and a lot of emotional depth to explore. I guess the epilogue is all that's left? If so, congrats on making it past the 3-year anniversary!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. Shes just going through the motions, and hearing bout her mother certainly didn't help. Such a sad state of affairs. Makes me wonder ifin she'll ever get herself together. But as I recall, when a Phoenix dies it is reborn, Ne? Heh, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 05:31 PDT
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Hmm.. First I frowned. Then I cried. Then I cried some more. Then I cheered at the enterance of Momiji! WHOO HOO!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 12:10 PDT
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Over chapter 82 and 83 you have managed to kill off almost everybody, psychologically torture many members of the remaining cast, twist moments of manga into an almost unrecognizable quality, brought to light the love of a miko and a sword youkai and then destroy it in the same moment, and held me at the edge of my seat the whole time. Excellent Job!!! But I'm a little scared to read the next chapter. Kagome's losses aren't really going to matter to Yashita, but they will probably decimate her, huh? Perhaps I need to drink a beer first, and then read... Thank you so much for writing this story for us. I've been following it with almost as much anticipation and nail biting as I have the actual manga.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 11:26 PDT
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WOW! What a chapter! I was biting my lip almost the entire time, wishing for Kagome back. The Kagome. Not the sad, distressed person she is now. You don't know how relieved I feel after reading Momiji-san's name!! Hope Kagome gets her butt kicked a little back into the right place. :) You are awesome! Keep up the GREAT work!!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 10:08 PDT
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*sniffle* you made me want to cry... or maybe it's just the hormones - I've been somewhat weepy since the baby was born. Hopefully someone can kick Kags butt out of the funk! So no more angst, time for the happy ending???
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