| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: Li Hudson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 09:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEAUTIFUL JOB! I'm so impressed you finished this monster. You have re-invented the anime in a wonderfully unique way and I'm so proud of you finishing this great story. Thanks so much for being consistent and sharing your imagination with us!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 06:34 PDT
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Haha! Loved the ending! Nicely wrapped up, I have to say. And considering I just gave birth to my first son 2 and a half wks ago, it made me all sentimental. So, what's the next project?
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Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful ending! I like how you kept with the current "three years later" theme; whether or not that was premeditated, it was a nice touch. I also agree that it's wonderful that you ended the story by giving them a new child. Their lives are about to get a whole lot more interesting, but while we may miss out on those details, we can all find peace in the knowledge that their lives are finally peaceful.
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 01:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO!!!!! what a fantastic ending!!! so worth the three years it took to write....and you gave us the one thing beloved Takahashi-sensai didn't...a final sweet kiss!!! sorry, had to get that out of my system....anywho, I enjoyed every minute of reading this epic tale...but one burning question remains...did Fenik ever come back to her? aside from the occasional "hum" you never said if he came back to her...ah well, the reader always has more questions I suppose. Thank you, so very much, for this wonderful story!!
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 00:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I might cry! I can't believe its over! It was so wonderful and so fantastic! I know I Will read it over and over again! Its just an amazing story all together. You are a true fantastic writer, the way with the words only show how natural you are at it. I don't think I could ever write something that long and not be brought to tears! Its like a watching a baby grow into an adult! Fantastic Work!
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 23:57 PDT
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Hey Feni! Well done, and congratulations on finishing! I just got home from the marathon driving/moving junk that I told you about and I had to read the epilogue, even though it's almost midnight. NOW I can send you that present we talked about! You've given us a fantastic ride (pun intended) and taught me a great deal (but now I have to finish 'Facets', you taskmistress!). Again, well done!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 19:01 PDT
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Feni, you're my hero. Don't make us wait too long for another story. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 16:45 PDT
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:sigh: What a wonderful ride it's been. I'm glad that you gave Kagome a new child. I'm giggling over Feni as the name. I think Yashita is actually too jealous to accept that name. :) Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 16:36 PDT
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* extreme temper tantrum feet kicking,screaming, hands pounding the ground * ¢À Mummy make them write more! it is not allowed to end ¢À It's not fair! I WANT MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All you can say is AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and that I will miss reading this story very much!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to say too much. Your new update came while I was at the office so, read it as soon as I've got home. What can I say? You make me laugh, you make me cry, you make me mad, you scared the hell out of me, you make me dream. I'm going to miss this, absolutely. I'm already missing Fenik!!! It's been a while since I felt so connected to a story, even though -now and then- wanted to knock Kagome out. But... you gave us one of the best stories in the fandom. Can't believe I started reading it last year!! Read it in one sit!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!
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Title: What a great 3 year ride!
Reviewed By: redney [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's kind of strange whenever you like a fanfic more than the canon original but that is how I feel about Phoenix Blade. Beautifully written for an adult audience keeping true to each character. I like how you plotted your own course and just forged ahead without regard to the monotonous plodding of the original manga. I loved the last line about the Feni (can't spell it) name. I know that all good things must end but I find myself feeling a little sad today because there will be no more new PB chapters. Oh well...on to the sequel for Exchanged and any other little plot bunnies that you have rattling around in that very creative head of yours. Keep em coming and I'll keep reading...oh and WRITE A REAL BOOK, you're too good to not give it a shot. I love your stories. Renee
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Title: Ahh baby
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 14:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I humbly request holiday oneshots in the future...I don't think I was ready for this to end eaither, better go back and read it from the start.
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Title: The Phoenix Blade
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 13:37 PDT
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Well, It's over. It's been a rollicking, rolling, roller coaster of a ride that covered the past 3 years with a wonderful, well told, hairy eyeball giving, laughing, crying, gasping, riviting story that was told with a refreshingly different spin on it that made it all new again. Thank you Fennikusuken for a job amazingly well done. I don't know what I'm going to do without a next chapter to look forward to with your name on it. I have enjoyed this so much. Hopefully, you have something else up your sleeve to tittilate me with. I can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 13:08 PDT
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Cute ending! ^_^
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