| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 14:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this took me a week to read and it was well worth it. You are a great writer, you captured your audience and kept them wanting more. I can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 05:01 PST
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One of these days I'm going to get to review this story right after I read it while all my comments and questions are fresh on my mind. Splended chapter, as all ways. And the chapter I've been waiting for is closing near. I knew if I waited nicely it would come. I have been dying to know what happened when Inuyasha and Kagome were first...presented to the court. Since Kagome is has already had a pratice run (in the future no less) I'm sure she'll be the one making Inuyasha calm down. How weird is that? Since he had to do the same for her. Sometimes I re-read the previous chapters and those cryptic conversations make so much since (after I see what they already know). Sometimes I have ideas on it and other times I don't even bother to try and decode them. I don't see how Kagome hasn't yanked her hair out when trying to decipher them. And I went along with the assumption that Sess has both arms. If I'm wrong let me know. Oh this question has been burning in me for a while. Do you send Shippo off during fights because it is the easiest way to explain why the horses aren't there or because you secretly believe that "children" should not see the fighting that they do? And I am so dumb. I've just recently become aware as to why the vapors on the sword are both red and green. *smacks forehead* Don't tell anybody. Sess is so terrible. Exploting Kagome's power when she'd not even awake to enjoy it. I'm sure she would have been more than welcome to walk around with Fenik in spectural doggie form snarling at everyone that opposed to her being there. Fenik...that boy is pushing his luck. Inuyasha would crack him into a zillion pieces if he knew that he was kissing and hugging Kagome like that! Kagome better not let it slip. And Rin with her innocence. Things have a different meaning when kids say them. Any other poor sould would have been struck down for saying such words. True or not. I'm happy Git is there for Kag. It must be hard for him to know that such a powerful friend has been injuried this bad. Well I guess I should stop rambling now. I look forward to your update and seeing how you spend the events/battles/bad guys that I KNOW must happen/appear. This is so exciting. It's like...watching the show for the first time I guess...
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:36 PST
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Absolutely wonderful. I love it when Inuyasha is all concerned for Kagome. I hope he drives her nuts during her convalesence. I'm not sure about how I feel towards Rin. It may just be that I don't like her as a character normally. Anyway, wonderful update as always. Please update soon. Now that my finals are over, I can actually read fanfic again!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 12:24 PST
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Teehee! A Human is first lady of the Western Lands by dint of marriage toa half-bredd! Quel amusement!
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Title: Very Satisfying...
Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 16:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...as usual. You just keep dishing out the most delightful and filling chapters. This story just keeps getting better and better as you continue to hone your craft of storywriting. It is such a pleasure to get updates! I was all choked up when Inuyasha handed Kagome to Sesshoumaru. You got the best lines! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 15:48 PST
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awwwwwwwwwww Rin's sooooooo cute...i LOVE the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 17:48 PST
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 14:15 PST
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I'm sure Licensia Poetica and Lady Rhiyana are thrilled to have a cliffie written for them. Sorry I haven't really reviewed lately, but I have been reading. It's nice to have a story that actually is well written in the Inuyasha fandom. And Sessaki's warning is worrying me too. Maybe it's Sango or Miroku, because they couldn't survive to the future naturally, so Kagome wouldn't know their fate. Gah! Well, hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Title: Heee!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 08:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffies? Moi? I NEVER leave the reader guessing! But I'm honored you dedicated yours to me... *snort* As always, a wonderful treat to read. Now I'm off to write another cliffie...er, another chapter in 'Facets' Thanks for the chapter and the giggles!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 23:29 PST
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awesome chapter! loved feniks little outburst, kickin' ass and showing who's boss! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 19:10 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't believe you ended it like that!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!!! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap..oh yea! Was wondering what was gonna happen, lol...that was great!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 13:55 PST
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I hope you realize that the end of that chapter was SO cruel! Actually, I'm sure you do realize that, lol, and it was completely intentional...so I suppose that instead of having a fit over, I should just skip right to the begging. Because I really, really want to see the next chapter! After all, reading the summary at the top and then the part about Inuyasha and Sessaki meeting, I was hoping it would all happen in this chapter. Should have known better, huh? But at least Yashita finally managed to make an appearance, so I'm happy about that! I'm also glad that you finally revealed what happened to Shiori, and that it WON'T take place anytime soon! That would be terribly depressing for her to die that young, and then I really would have been calling you evil, lol...but anyway, great chapter, and I'll be looking forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 22:02 PST
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I hope you dont mind but I might post Feink on my Xanga site....I'll tell you if I do if you say i can...anon...nevermind??...o_o.....^_^!!...But anyways Very cool story....Squeet actually!!
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Title: Kagooommeeee! You have some 'splaining to dooo!
Reviewed By: bluefuzzyelf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 15:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've steadily read through this story over the past three days, spurred by seeing the drawing of Fenik at KrisCynical's devart site. I love it. Really, truly love it, and I love this Kagome. She is still pure of heart and loving and kind, but she also can kick some serious ass! Also, hentai!Inuyasha, yay! The whole military pov is pretty awesome. BTW, if you get tired of saying "fatigues" you could also use the word "BDU's", cause they're the same thing. I hope you update soon, and that the plotbunnies aren't small flat furry disks, cause I know how that is.
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