| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Title: Howdy
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to add that I simply adore Kumo & the other tenbaryu. Where can I get one? If they reside soley in your cerebral cortex, may I lease a small space in there? I promise to keep it tidy.
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 04:17 PDT
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phew! you got me again! The truth is, Fenik darling, that your characterization of Sesshoumaru and his commitment to Rin, just like your battle scenes, always manage to move me right to the core... Not that i don't enjoy everythinh you do, but these are in my opinion the best parts, the moment where you really give it your all. You're the best!! And i want you to know i've voted for you in the IYFG awards, as usual.. i mean, what can i do but vote, who can match this? And congratulations for winning all those awards too!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 17:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great. It is the best story I have ever read. Please I'm begging, and I hate begging, so please write more.
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Reviewed By: rouge_tempest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic!!!! It's amazing! It's original. It's just so captivating! Everything about this is so unique! I'll be so sad for it to end. Then I wouldn't know what to read. I can't wait for the next chapter! I know that I'll always come back to this to read and enjoy!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 09:23 PDT
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Woderful couple of chapters. Inu's reaction to H's leering at Kags was wonderful. I also think that your battle scenes are getting much better. The descriptions are fluid enough that sometimes I feel like I'm really watching all of this on the tube. Inu's meeting all of the people from the future was a fun moment. It is as if everyone wants to see their uncle again after a long time ago. I wonder if Yashita has remembered these moments and told the others? Through this last chapter I wondered just how much longer your Kagome will be able to move back and forth in the past, and when the youthful Inu will loose her. Do you think that you will add in a section of the chapter where she 'leaves' that tells a little more of his thoughts and feelings when that time happens? Thanks for writing for us and please please please let Kagome come back to the future to be with Yashita....please. It would be devistating (mainly to him, but also to the readers) if that didn't happen.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Let Slip' was so damn intense I had stop at every break for a break. Hakimaru must have learned from his past failures that "pulling a Naraku" doesn't always work. He was quite the bastard! And deserved a long drawn out torture for his past deeds, but I'm glad that ass is dead. Girly moment…how cute is InuYasha with armor?! *smirk* Good to see the brothers getting along and acknowledging on some level they are more than 'bastard' and 'half-breed', even knowing how they are with each other in the future. That is some amazing concealment that not even scent is detected! Always nice to have help from some old 'friends', even if you are not aware of it. So if Souta figures there's a month left until Naraku's defeat, there is still TONS of stuff for you to write about…InuYasha's POV (as mentioned in someone else's review) of the decades without his mate, how Sessaki & Rin courted etc, the changes in Edo & the Fortress over the centuries, Kagome getting to know Yashita after the well closes...YES, I am trying to make this story last forever! :) Thank you for another great chapter! I wait patiently for MORE! :) ...On a totally off note, anyone ever notice the spam filter sometimes makes sense? Mine is QRTY today
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible chapter, as usual, but umm... you mean she had dried baby batter on her for several days?! I loved it, really. I was kinda hoping she would put him in traction for the little bit of rough handling from last chapter, but I guess that's on the back burner now since she has such a tight time constraint now. Shoot! I really hate to see this wind down. It really has turned out to be one of those few stories you never want to end!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 23:13 PDT
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Glee...! Bloody, but god damn good! I was curious as to how this would all go down with Sessh's uncle. I wasn't expecting a full blown massacare/coup. The descriptions were amazing and the emotion was tense and enthralling. I wish I'd been able to read it in one sitting. I love this story so much...! I'm planning on it being one of my multiple re-reads. And last chapter was great too. Speaking of last chapter, the consequences of the forgotten contraceptive could make things quite interesting, especially if she actually is and Inuyasha figures it out in the next few weeks... It would make her disappearance even more difficult for Inuyasha. I love the scene where he tells her he wants their daughter to be able to wear his mother's comb. It was really touching; I could "hear" this wonderful mixture of longing, hope and shyness in his "voice". I love the relationship they have, it's wonderful. BTW, will we get to see any of Inuyasha's POV for the 500 yrs she's gone? I'm interested in seeing how he became the Yashita we see later and VERY interested in how Kagome will adjust to the change in their relationship. But I suppose I'll have to wait... Good luck with the next few chapters! May the words flow freely from your fingertips. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 22:52 PDT
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no!!! you can't be wrapping up!! what will i read without you?
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 21:33 PDT
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I tend not to comment much but - my God - your work is fantastic. I get so terribly excited every time I see an update posted.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 19:44 PDT
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I really enjoyed the whole Hakimaru(sp?) arc. I liked seeing the inner workings of the western court and not having the faintest idea what would happen except that Hakimaru wiuld have his ass handed to him and certain characters would have to survive. Also appreciated the basic n00b spear defence. Awesome chaper, as always.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 17:33 PDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is my favorite fic every I am totally loving this "filler" cuz to be honest sometimes the parts that mirror the show get a little boring, but that still doesn't take away from the amazingness. I love the dynamic you've set up between Kagome and Inuyasha and I can't wait to see Yashita again. keep up the amazing job with the next chapter. Thanks so much for this story. Lub, Talons
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was sucha long wait!!! although worth it!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have a confession. A friend of mine has been pestering me to read this for a while now, and I was too stubborn to listen. I tend to be wary of AU's, since the ones I've read have either been really depressing, or once you're hooked (say around the ch. 20 mark), the author seems to lose where they want to go with it and fizzles out. Now, I'm glad she is incredibly good at peer pressure. I admit, I cheated & read this last chapter you posted first so I would have an idea of what I was getting myself into, but then went back and started at the beginning. I'v been reading it until my eyes bled. I'm hooked! Your characters are perfect. I particularly love Kagome. I can't stand it when she's portrayed as a mealy-mouthed doormat. The visuals you create for the mind's eye are stunning. You are an awesome story teller and meticulous. I don't think I'v caught any grammatical errors, crazy mood or tense switching yet. I love it, and I haven't yawned yet! I better go now, so I can catch up on reading this. Maybe I should eat first, before you have me wasting away to nothing. That's meant to be taken as a compliment, since I have an incredibly short attention span. Congratulations on an awesome job!!!!
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