Title: The First of Many
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe this fic doesn't have any reviews yet. It certainly deserves any and all praise soon to come its way. I just have to say that you have a rather upbeat and highly enjoyable manner of writing, character portrayal, pacing, and plot development. The smooth blend and movement between the hightech realm and the historical era is absolutely delightful and refreshing to read. Although Inu Yasha's character can be somewhat OOC during his rather easy acceptance of Kagome initially, the verbal sparring and sexual under current between the two definitely compensates for the latter, entertainment wise at least. You have me anxiously waiting the next chapter in order to find out more about the Inu-tachi of the future and how everything will unfold for them. I'm truly looking forward to reading how you'll incorporate all the original story arcs into your fic. Until the next chapter, keep up the creative wheels turning and keyboard typing. Update ASAP, please and thank you!!!!
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