| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:16 CST
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p.p.s. FLAME!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:14 CST
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P.S. Rin was to over the top get it fixed you bum.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:13 CST
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Good story took ya long enough to finish it!!! Love your Beta Tiffy
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on finishing this story! Happy Holidays and I hope everything works out well for you with all your issues. I look forward to reading more writings by you and I hope you do well in all your endeavors!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 20:49 CST
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I am quite impressed. When I first read the epilouge, I was like "Holy crap, maybe this is HER story!!!" but then you said you were fifteen, and I was like "bummer..." but then I realized you were my age and then I was like "Whoa, she has way more commitment than me!" Seriously, four years? crazy awsome!!! Haha, I'm a hyper kid, too. This was an excellent romance story, and the part I appreciate the most is the fact that you admit having the kids so young was just a pre-teen thing, and even then you had an excellent reason for having them young (you know, the whole 'kids getting misdiagnosed with depression' thing, a topic rather close to me.) Anyway, I hope you enbark on another IY fic, till then...here's your flame! Graaah! I hate this fic, this is terrible! Where's the sex? Where's the swearing? Blah blah blah realism blah blah blah angst blah blah! Well, I tried.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyable. Sort of wish you could've gone on with the InuYasha-Kikyou-Kagome angst, and their ages are completely unrealistic (plus, don't you think 18 is a little young to be getting married?) but still, not bad. Post the epilouge!
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Reviewed By: bubble buster On: November 23, 2008 00:43 CST
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why is everyone so young in this fic? by law Sango can't be her age and be the pysciatrist. I can see some of the nurses being lpns and 19 at least. I work in pysch. maybe if you fix Miroku's age and title from whatever he is to head rn and be 29 and Sango can actually be a psychologist and be 29. the youngest doc in my department is 26 and they were a child prodigy. as for the others, Kagome could be 18 taking her 1st shot at interning. or she could be a 1st year medstudent. next time do reserch on the subject
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 23:57 CST
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Yay! You did it! You rock! And I liked it, too. The story, the ending. It doesn't really need an epilogue, but if you feel those ends need tying up, go for it.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...LOVE...Rin! And I loved this story! Rotfl @ "Does the deranged one speak the truth?" It really was an interesting ride. Definetely do an epilogue! It'd be nice to see the wedding or some sort of glimpse into everyone's future. Congratulations on completing your first fic! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 22:34 CDT
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(nods philosophically) I totally understand. That happened with me too many times before...but you, my friend, are better than I, for I had two stories I hated that were going in circles, but I didn't finish either. (grins) Actually, I'm more like Kagome. People wish I could act dumb sometimes too, to which I promptly respond, "There are plenty other people to act dumb for you monkeys. I ain't one of them." It saddens me that Inuyasha's throwing himself back into the old spiral once more, but I do hope good things soon happen for our lovely couple.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 20:38 CDT
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Oh my. I want to bitch slap Inuyasha for the last two chapters. Thank you for the next installment. I totally understand being tired of your own fic. It happens. XD I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You may hate it now, but I'm still enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: tangolover On: September 18, 2008 12:44 CDT
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HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO POOR KAGOME!~!!!!!!!!!!!! UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...INUYASHA IS SUCH A BASTARD!!!!!! OHHHH AND YOU BETTER NOT HAVE HIM HURT KAGOME ANYMORE BECAUSE OF THAT FACT THAT SHE ACCIDENTALY GAVE KIKYOU A PEICE OF HER SOUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGHHHHHHHHHHH.........KIKYOU ALWAYS HAS TO RUIN EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE VERY SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing! finally hardcore angst with the present as well as the past! poor Kagome, Inuyasha better do something to make it up to her! But not without a little more drama, of corse. Keep up the good work, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: September 14, 2008 20:21 CDT
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well that chapter made me crack up-at the rin thing, then almost cry-at the kagome thing. so i have to say: fantastic chapter! and just when i was thinking, no one would update today!
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 18:21 CDT
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Strangely enough, I agree with the school thing. God. That was cold, Inuyasha. Your girl's sitting right there, and you're all, "I love her, and I'm not gonna let anything happen to her!" I don't know what to say other than this: Dude...harsh.
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