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Title: Bas & Sidney
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, well done, well done, I loved this story, like I have loved all the rest. I have only this to say to Gunner, Dude, NEVER say NEVER, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. You'll live to regret it, I did. Just wonderful. Thanks Sue
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Title: Excellent Sue, Thanks
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, Evan is a little debaucher, isnt he? Chicks dig babies, indeed! Lmao. And just love it when the husband always says they didnt get from me, they got it from their mother, lol. Cant wait to see how things went as far as the task force was concerned, as well as what Evan gets into later on. This was really excellent Sue. You just seem to keep out doing yourself. And I only have one word to say cuz its over: Balls! :P
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may not have commented for a while, but I have continued to read each new chapter you've posted. This has to be my favorite of all the Purities, even though this one had some very heart-wrenchingly sad moments. I'm thrilled, but also disappointed with the arrival of the epilogue of Phantasm. It's the end of a GREAT story, but it's also the beginning, so to speak, of a wonderful one. And even with all the angsty bits throughout Phantasm, I still love it, and I know I'll love any other Purity story you write. Thank you for everything you've written, and thank you in advance for future Purity-related projects you come up with. ~Kat
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 20:59 CDT
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Oh my, another Purity fiction done! Congrats! Such a great story. Can't wait til you put up more chapters of Purity 6... i think im going to really enjoy that one ^^
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A job, eh? HMMM... Interesting. I think she'd be good at it too. Also makes me wonder where Bas was if he left in plenty of time to take her to her test. And Evan...he just seems to like to get into trouble. If for no other reason than to just piss off any and everyone. Still haven't figured out why he's so angry with Bas tho. And thank you much for answering my questions. I thought it was only InuYasha who trained them all. Great chapter. And Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:32 CDT
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You're just setting us up for Evan's story, and I can't wait. He sounds like such a character, but I know there's something deep inside him. I can't wait to get into his head :D Ew, but geez. Not coming home at night? That's really got to suck. And how long have they been married, a month or something? Kudos to Bas for being so dedicated, but he really needs to take a look around him. Heehee, what's Cain gonna do to whip his son into form?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 18:13 CDT
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I think Sydnie would make a good boss lol. Wow, she got all the questions right? WTG Sydnie! Lol.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 13:40 CDT
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I love the way you incorporated Sydnie into their job. And thanks so much for the heads up on the Purity series lets me know I at least still have one great writer left. I adore your writing it seems to definately be your passion. and mine is to read. Waiting for the next. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I'm a little confused I thought I was understanding Bas and Evan's relationship but now... Leave it to you Sue to completly throw me for a loop in the last chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really waht to know what is up with Evan and Bas.
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Title: evans story
Reviewed By: merutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 20:21 CDT
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is eans story the next one after jillians ?
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:35 CDT
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I'm starting to feel really bad for Evan. He is obviously jealous of Bas's position as the heir(or I think he is) and it's causing problems between he and Bas. Not to mention all of the other stupid things he does just to make every authority figure in his life angry with him. I hope he works that out because he can't go around fighting his brother all the time - look at what happened in this chapter. Although I feel bad for Evan I can't say that I disagree with how Bas handled the situation. Bas didn't really want to fight, but if Evan choses to fight then he can't back down, nor can he go easy on someone who challenges him just because it's his brother. He is the future taiyoukai, so he can't afford to be too gentle. If someone is going to challenge him then has to defend himself, and there is always the risk of getting hurt in a fight. Evan knew that so now he has to deal with the consequences.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 17:52 CDT
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I have realized, with great guilt, that despite reading all the purities, I have never reviewed, strike me down if you wish! Anyway, now I have reviewed and I would like to say that your stories, from the whole Purity group or not, have made me cry and laugh many a time...so thanks for them.
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Title: Question...
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan is just a little upset. It gives pause as to why, even tho he said he really didnt want Bas' position. Interesting. I do have a question about their training tho. Didnt InuYasha train Bas as well as Gunner? Or was it both him and Ryomaru? And who trained the rest? I knew it was InuYasha who trained the twins, Gin and Toga: but did he train the others as well. He dont seem like he would be really satisfied if someone else did it. Anyways, great chapter and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:33 CDT
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Wow... I don't like Sessh/Kags fics much(Cuz I just can't stand the way most people write them) but this one-shot was the bomb! I did cry a bit, but I love that one-liner of Sesshoumaru's at the end... ^^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 15:26 CDT
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Wow, that was an intense fight between Evan and Bas, awesome, but intense! I hope Sydnie does good on her GED! She probably will!
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