| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Title: Poor Evan....
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 14:01 CDT
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I feel really sorry for Evan...I mean, I know he's bad...real bad, but so much is expected of him. I guess he had to make himself different just so that he didn't always feel like he wasn't measuring up to either his father or brother...or the rest of his family for that matter. Plus, I've noticed that he's not real close with anyone. With the exception of his mom and living with Jillian for awhile, it seems like he's isolated himself from his entire family...it seems like he's never included with everyone. I wonder if its because of his brother, and if so, what happened to make them drift apart? I don't know, but your killing me Sue!! I feel so bad for Evan...but I have hope because Valorie will make him happy...right? Ooohhhh, I'm getting all depressed...sniff... must go huggle Mikio...sniff...
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so am I on the right track, Evan is jealous of Bas? He seems to be even more since Sydnie came home with him. And if so that means that Myrna (did i spell that right) might prove as an distraction. Have you given any thought to starting a story surrounding Evan and Gunnar? I would love to read one. I hope I'm not intruding on your masterpieces just thought it might be an idea if you were looking for one.
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, I just looked . You been updating alot. Even if april vacation only ended today. Lot of readin I have to do now. Haha. Excellent work so far once again you amaze me. Good day.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, and very informative. So much seems to be weighing on Bas right now, wonder how long it takes to get things right for himself. Interesting. HMMM...update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 23:00 CDT
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I love how they used to be close. Are you going to go into detail? On what happened and where everything went wrong? I'd love to know what Evans unresolved issue is.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe. Poor Evan. I feel really sorry for him... I hope Evan and Seb become closer again. =D Anyway. Great chapter! Can't wait for more. xD
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:39 CDT
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heh, that was cute, rather funny too. is there going to be a purity story about evan? please, please, please let there be one, it would be more interesting that what happened with ryo mating nez! awesome chapter as always and cant wait to read more, i cant believe this one is almost done!!!
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Title: Bas -n- Evan
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute...very cute. I guess ALL of the male relatives want to try the catnip trick for themselves! I can't wait to see what drove Bas and Evan apart...because no matter how bad evan is, I can't help but love him for his goofy behavior!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I understand whats going on with Bas and Evan. I know what it's like have soo many years between siblings, me and my bro are 7 years apart. And even though Evan was close to Jillian she was a girl so it wouldn't be the same. Add on Bas is the same age the cousins not Evan so he didn't even have any cousin to pal around with. Evan and I sound a lot alike, now I can completely understand the distance between Bas and Evan. Thanks for taking this chapter to explain Bas and Evan's relationship a little better, their relationship was one that was bugging me. Well wonderful chapter Sue I can't wait to read the last chapter to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:39 CDT
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aww! they used to be buds! so cute!! and sad! poor evan!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:16 CDT
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Aww, that's sad! I'd never imagine that Bas would do something like that, but then again, he was a teenage boy, so I guess I can lol.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful couple of chapters! I cant wait for the next one. Haha catnip... that was brilliant. :P
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay just caught up... Wow, this was, spectacular! I loved this story, you get better and better with each story of Purity and I love how you ended up incorporating each aspect of the other characters... I'm glad you put Syd's real family history at the very end... It made it truely suspenseful and kind of sad about her sister. *thumbs up* 10/10 :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:26 CDT
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Aww, that was a cute chapter. I also like the one-shot you did, even though it was sad, very well writen, and I cried in it lol; no surprise there.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 15:14 CDT
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aww!! so sweet! i'm glad they got her family stuff taken care of. poor girl! and yey for family pictures!!
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