| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:27 CDT
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Aww, that's sad about Sydnie's parents, but it was very sweet at the ending; saying that she wants Cain to be at the wedding.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:51 CDT
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ohhh!!! ::tear:: so sweet!! i'm glad she asked him!! cain has to be there!! great chapter!! and lol! frikin evan! hilarious. he didn't even stop when the principle found them!!
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Title: Making Amends
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very excellent chapter, Sue! I couldn't stop laughing about Evan and the talk between Sydnie and Cain left me feeling warm and happy. Thank you for the great update! I was wondering do you ever read any Yaoi? Thanks again and take care of you.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:35 CDT
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I was wondering how this chapter was going to go. I'm very happy with the way things turned out! Hooray for Cain getting to attend the wedding! After last chapter I had to check out the family tree to get things in order. Thanks Sueric! Great chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, Sue. I liked how you delved into Evan little more. Showing us more of his wonderful personality. Damn, if he don't remind me of one of my sons, lmao. And was wondering how it was gonna go with Cain and Sydnie. Again, great chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, really I was wondering when they would get to talking. I have a request of you though I realize you are a busy woman with alife of your own. I recently posted a one shot here on mediaminer and would be honoured if you could read it. The choice is yours though I would be eternally grateful if you chose to read it. Thanks for gracing us humble beings with your amazing writing skill.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 15:06 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter. Evan is quite the character... ^^ And Sydnie's story is even sadder than before, I couldn't help but cry. My favorite part though, was at the end, when Sydnie told Cain she wanted him to come to the wedding. I can't wait to see the wedding. ^^
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 16:35 CDT
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SOrry if I dont review sometimes it wont let me, anyway excellent chapter I really enjoy the cousins they are all cute and I cant wait and am jsut wondering when will Gunnar get his own story cause I cant wait to see more of Toga again!
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:03 CDT
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Last three chapters were awesome. It's always nice to see the family interacting, they're all so amusing. ^^ I can't wait to see if Sydnie will actually talk to Cain. The wedding will most certainly be interesting. "Who's your Daddy?" ^^ Still can't get over that... Gunnar rocks!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 02:00 CDT
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Gunnar is her "daddy"? Now, if that becomes a used family joke (like she continues to call him her daddy) that will make the family tree even more interesting! I can't even imagine Bas/Sydnie's children trying to submit that family tree for a school project! As for my previous comment - thanks for the link! That will solve many mental angst when trying to place all the "M" boys. I noticed that you "answered" my Inuyasha observation in the text - I am not sure if I was psychic, we were on the same train of thought, or I inspired something. Either way - he is getting rather profound lately! I have to laugh because our little dog boy is growing up! I am glad you addressed the changes in his life and one of the things I like so much about your stories is the fact that your characters do grow in logical manners. I also thought I might suggest a fanfic (if it is not out of place fore me to do so). I don't read very many different ones nowadays - flattery aside, you are the primary author I follow as of late. This one, however, had me reading for over 30 hours straight and that is saying a lot. It is a Sess x Kag fic but also really well done (writing, plot, and character development all superb). It is only on Fanfiction To Wash it All Away by Crystal Echoes (story ID: 1825663). I am not sure if you do much reading of other works but I thought you might be interested.
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Title: Hilarious
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Loved all the banter between the boys. Gunner: whos your daddy? Lmao. He reminds me a lot of his father in a way. Attitude wise, I think maybe Toga was a little more shy maybe? ( IE, the calender) Anyways, I love how youve brought em all together. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 17:01 CDT
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Well, good luck with the one-shot...I know it'll be good!!! Hope you're having a wonderful Easter!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 02:01 CDT
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Just want to wish you a Happy Easter!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 16:16 CDT
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=D These last couple of chapters have been completely and totaly awesome! Keep up the good work and cant wait till those two get married. =D
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Title: Kissing Cousins
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very funny chapter! I couldn't stop laughing about the snowball fighting and then the kiss. Looking forward to reading about Sydnie confronting Cain. Thank you for the updates, Sue!
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