| "Her Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 177 ] |
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Title: Lovley
Reviewed By: Miho Momo On: May 07, 2006 20:44 EDT
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I loved that Sesshomaru practically called Rin a whore.I really like Jaken in this fic.For once he's not looking like someones bitch.
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: May 06, 2006 19:56 EDT
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Clearly, the only way to fix the situation between Rin and Jaken is for Sesshoumaru to give him some lovin' as well... (eww please no) I really hope Sesshoumaru is valuing Rin for who she is, not as a sex object. You say you write too many lemons, but I say there weren't enough in the chapter. What does that say about me? ^_^;
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Reviewed By: Kira Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! Very cute. And I'm happy you didnt have Sessy jump straight to making her his mate or anything l;ike other fic writers. This seems more like somthing Sessy would do.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 16:00 EDT
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Wow! I can't believe he made her his concubine...and that necklace...I'm jealous =P I love what you're doing with this story and I can't wait for the next update. oh...and no fair cutting that lemon short =P
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Reviewed By: Puddle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:07 EDT
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Yes, Portia! We shall do it. We will start the first brower47 fan/worship club. We can be the club presidents. *nods* Yes, yes. This will work out nicely... *evil laugh* *shifty eyes* Anyway, nice update. I started dancing when I read the description of the room. I was like, 'YES! Rin gets treated like the awesome girl she is!' And you wouldn't believe how happy I was when I saw the email that you had updated in my inbox. I was going to dance for joy in the street, but thought that might end in pain so I decided agaisnt it. So, keep up the good work and your fan/worship club and I will be faithfully awaiting your return and update. *worships*
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Reviewed By: Susy On: May 04, 2006 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I read the first chapter of this fic like 3 month ago, but I was so lazy back then that I couldn't bring myself to submit a review. But since you said that it was gonna be one shot I didn't bother to keep track of the story and now I found that you decide to make it a more than 1 chap story and I have to said that I'm delighted. I was kind of sad that Rin have been left feeling just pain. I'm glad that she's learning that there's more to it. But, how are you going to manage the emotional thing? After all just a woman can understand another woman's feelings and this girl doesn't know anything about those feelings because she's grown up whit someone who doesn't know anything about emotions, specially human female emotions. Guess they both will have to learn in the process, huh? Anyway, good work.
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: May 03, 2006 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Thanks for the update! I really hope you continue.... ;)
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Reviewed By: Ai On: May 02, 2006 18:35 EDT
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aws very goods..but u never answered about the pregnancy thing and is anythign gonna happen like a plot or just them having sex..XD
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 01, 2006 14:11 EDT
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Sweet... Make sure his death is slow and torturous. Now, great chapter. I loved it! *claps* I'm very pleased with it!! Good job ^_^
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Reviewed By: DYquem (NSI) On: April 30, 2006 21:21 EDT
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It will be interesting to see what do with this. Sess seems to have all the sexual prowess of the local OX. I can tell you mean to improve that. Rin will obviously need to figure out what Jaken means and the meaningt of the word "whore" Jaken will need to end up under green sludge, or better yet, die at Rins hands. By the way, I always heard that PWP meant "plot? What plot?" Similar concept, but somewhat more graceful.
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Reviewed By: BIG-DEE On: April 30, 2006 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, I am looking forword to the next update. I love how you have such good 3D plot to your story. It is very unlike the same old S/R story that you can get, they always have the same boring poorly witten story. But your have a feshness to it. I love how you go into what there feeling, that make the story such a read. I hope that Jaken get what coming to him, love to see how that one will trun out. I do not have must more to say beside I hope you will keep up with this story and that there will not be a long time between update. Again I love your stroy.
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Reviewed By: Ranis On: April 29, 2006 08:30 EDT
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A short story? Please don't make it too short! I like this story far too much. ^_^ I still like Jaken. It can't be easy for him to watch himself get so completly usurped in such a short time by a human girl. Not to mention that he's (inadvertently!) helping Rin think through the bigger issues in her relationship with the mongrel.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 05:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have her ask him one day, after jaken has been an ass, what a whore is and then get him to provok her to say everything that jaken had told her! and then he can get all pissed off at the stupid fucker lol
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Title: I'LL JOIN
Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: April 28, 2006 01:04 EDT
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OMG I WOULD TOTALLY JOIN YOUR WORSHIP CLUB! Yes Puddle you Must start this club of worshipness and I shall join you in the endeavor of eternal love and worshipping for this author!!!!
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Reviewed By: Portia(ADarkNightsObsession) On: April 28, 2006 01:00 EDT
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Thank you so much for explaing it to me! Now all i need to know is what WIP stands for... But you know what. Sesshomaru NEEDS to find out what Jakken said...death to Jakken Death to the Jakken! Lol, I love you and your genious PWP story!
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