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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 03:01 EDT
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If I had Inuyasha, I would watch it with both subtitles and dubbing on. But I only buy the manga. Ah, good, Kagome's going to give him some assistance.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Cake On: April 11, 2006 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE, HATE, HATE, you. Why? Because i don't hate you i love you! You are such a better writer then me, =( But i still love, love, love, your story, keep going!
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Reviewed By: moonwicca On: April 09, 2006 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no you cant leave it there this is one of the best inuyasha ranma crossover i have ever read
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:59 EDT
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I'm not sure how to do special characters on MM.org, if you even can, but you could try typing it out fianc`ee. Not perfect, I know, but it's something. Or you could use synonyms instead. I've never seen Inuyasha subtitled, so I wouldn't know how they pronounce it. Okay, Tessaiga it is. Thanks for clearing that up.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 21:49 EDT
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g'morning, I've only seen about three episodes of ranma, but it realy doesnt seem to matter in this fic, cos you dont assume knowledge. wahey! Leaving it for me to enjoy. Excellent kukuku
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Title: A Ranma fan
Reviewed By: Flamezilla On: April 08, 2006 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I can say nothing wrong regaurding the writing and characterization in the story. I felt at the points at which you intersected the two series left the Kagome and Shippo so out of Ranma's league that it totally ruined all hope for me enjoying it. You've killed any hope for a pro-Ranma story much less one in which he is worth a damn outside of a Inu-Yasha knock-off. As a Inu-Yasha romance it's top notch, as a Ranma story it's craptacular (I also have no love for those who take the ½ out of Ranma½, and no I don't count half demon). For half-assing it I give you a 5 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: STRAWBERRY INUYASHA On: April 07, 2006 03:09 EDT
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Hiya. I've just read the new update. That was really good. Now, I bet things are really going to get fun for Ranma. Hehehe. Life was never easy for him or Inuyasha... as far as I know. So, now... I'll wait for the next update. By the way, I have a fic idea. Thanks. SI.
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Reviewed By: wowi'mlucky On: April 06, 2006 23:34 EDT
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I really love this story PLEASE write more!!!!!! Also this is KICKASS! yep so hurry up and write more!!!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 23:17 EDT
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if it makes you feel any better i can't write it at all you should try reading my fanfics on ff.net... it's terrible i'm half considering just taking them down i write so much better now but i'm too much of a chicken to put them up. i so cannot wait til he tells Akane off woohoo fun times ahead!!!!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!! **stares at the end of the chapter, picks jaw up off the floor, and promptly falls off the couch** What a chapter! I was a little surprised to see Ranma go into a lot of detail over what has happened to him in the last three years, but then I realized he had to. Who'd believe him, otherwise? I am glad that he didn't mention just who the priestess is, or where she lives (though Nabiki will probably find out in about five minutes once she knows where to look), as things are probably going to get pretty dicey for Kagome (not like she can't handle herself, of course - this IS the Shikon priestess, after all) and the shrine in times to come. Considering what Shampoo alone does to walls....**shudders** I hate to see what Akane is going to do. I did like how merciless Ranma was with Ukyo at the end of the chapter. It probably is the only way to do this kind of thing. Especially since she didn't seem to be interested in giving him up. She does usually have the most sense, and low-key approach, to chasing Ranma, though. Never know. I assume there will be one chapter per "official" fiancee (I do *not* count Kodachi) for the telling of Ranma's life over the past three months? I certainly hope so - I look forward to the Shampoo and Akane chapters. **chuckles** I am rambling a bit, but Ranma's parting line was absolutely perfect - it showcases exactly how far he has come in the last three months versus the rest of the Wrecking Crew. I know I say this every chapter, but I really did love this one. Made me grin (and fall off the couch). I really like this amalgamation of Ranma and Inuyasha that you've come up with. Its a fun, and well-written story - and I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: April 05, 2006 10:32 EDT
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I like it! I was a little surprised since I'm not a huge Ranma fan but when a story is well written ... I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the stoey , please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 05, 2006 03:51 EDT
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hmm so that must be why... no u didnt leave any comments XD be sure to correct that. it would seem a lot is going to come together in the very near future. then nerima wreckers meet kagome and others.
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Title: Cool.
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: April 04, 2006 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the vote of confidence. And I really think I might try it. But I have to find an angle. I'm a huge fan of Ranma but I don't know much about it other than a bit of information. I'm a huge fan of both Shampoo and Sesshomaru and have an idea boiling in my brain. Now as for your new chapter... I was glad you updated. Now all he has to do is move out... And survive Akane's mallet. It's a bit sad to discover that Miroku and Sango are dead. I wish they had been reincarnated too. Thanks. SI.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:00 EDT
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Then write it Toukijin. That would be proper romanization anyway. Are you sure on Inuyasha's sword's name? Tetsu means iron, sai means cut, and the name has always been translated as Steel-cleaving Fang. I don't even know a definition for tessai(although tessei means Made from Iron). Plus, even the anime pronounces it Tet'saiga. What's your source of information for it being pronounced Tessaiga?
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