| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Title: Long time since my last review..
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just 'cause I haven't been writing doesn't mean I haven't been reading! I'm still absolutely in love with your works, they've been a large source of enjoyment for me over the past couple years. On a more personal note, I would like to thank you for being a huge influence on myself as a writer. Reading the carefully sculpted beauty of your works has helped create my writing style, which is incredibly influenced by yours. Your ability to bring these characters to life and play out interesting, realisitic, and emotionaly moving works is what I strive to achieve in the long run. As of now, the creativity you've embedded in me has helped me earn very good grades on my English writing assignments, so I can already see the huge improvements. Thank you so much for being so awsome!
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Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHHHHHHH I HATE YOUUUUUUUUU Nahhh not really, but hey, cool story I want to read some more now!! poor gavvie and poor jilli, it almost made me cryyyyyy Please update suun, love your stories!!!!! Byye
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:33 PDT
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Oh Darn, the both of them. Can't they get their act together? Gavin, you go out there, wish Jillian a Happy Birthday, and tell her the truth! Jillian, go back, celebrate with Gavin, and tell the truth! No wonder these two aren't going anywhere... Thank you so much for helping me! leeksandmisosoup
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 08:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats soooo sad! I cant believe that Gavvie forgot her birthday! (of course with everything going on lately...i can believe it) Hope everything works out with thoses two! great chapter sue! Thanks!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 01:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 17:00 PDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY! i know i say that for every single one of your purity stories (and all the other ones you write), but well its TRUE!!!!! and though we have not seen Evan all that much (or not enough in my opinion, lol) i LOVE HIM! i can't wait for more! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!! who's story is up next? or are you gonna leave that a secret?
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 12:35 PDT
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YES, they FINALLY talked about why Jillian stayed away from him for two years. Sort of, anyway. Jillian still didn't let Gavin really explain what happened, but its a start. At least now Gavin isn't outright saying that Jillian isn't his mate. But I think Gavin needs a rosary around his neck if he keeps referring to Jillian as just a kid. He can't have it both ways. Either Jillian is adult enough to make her own decisions or she's not. But that still shoudn't be an issue considering the fact that Jillian is an adult and knows exactly what she wants.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geeezzzz Gavvie! You still feel boring and like your not good enough? Well at least he's admitting his feelings to Jilli...at least by showing her physically. Great Chapter Sue....can't wait till Monday!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:16 PDT
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Oh, Jilli, why won't you listen to Gavvie? Sigh, women... (I'm a woman, hehehe). I was wondering where the sneak peek about Morio and Meara was. I can't seem to find it, so can you help me, please? And I'm sorry, I completely forgot to say thank you for helping me with the Family Tree (I still made one, but in Japanese). And is there going to be a Purity fanfic about Mikio and any of Rin's kids? Arigatou gozaimasu to ganbatte on your next and all chapters as well as your stories! And I really can't wait that long for Gunnar's story... Mata Atode, leeksandmisosoup!
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 23:33 PDT
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Mm the mystery sort of solved hehe. i hope gavin can get jili to listen to him. im so glad you got those chapters out quick hehe i was dien to know and now i do hehe. untill the next chap
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooo. Gavin make up your mind. I just cant wait till those to get together. It seems every time that they get closer, something pulls them apart (even if it's just by a little bit). But anyway. Wonderful chapters (since I havnt been on in a while to review them). And can't wait till the next one. wewt! =]
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 21:36 PDT
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Hmm, I wonder what is going to happen next. Someone really needs to strap those two into chairs and won't untie them until they work out all their problems and Gavin realizes that Jilli really does want to be with him, forever! Lol.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 21:20 PDT
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Great chapter! Yeessh....maybe Gavin is coming around after all. I almost read the teaser for the chapter after this not knowing this was posted. Not getting updates from mediaminer yet again. Oh well, your chapters are worth hunting down when the emails don't come =)
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh.... so everything is looking on the bright side of life. THe only problem is Gavins attitude. But that will probaly change in the next few chapters somewhere.... or mabey not. Thanks for posting your stories so readers like us can view and review.
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Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 19:37 PDT
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missed the answering machine huh... hope its nothing bad. fat chance right lol. How do you update soooo fast!! im home all day with my 2 boys and i just leave my gmail up and you keep popping up! im trying to get my fix before i leave for tampa for a week. ANNIVERSARY!! yay! FREE BABY SITTING!!! Happy Dance! thx for the updates however you do it! cya'll
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