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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An intriguing turn of events.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Pianogoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my hero...... I've read all of the purity stories up to date...hmmm, how about pairing one of our inu boys with a female that's always saving him?
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOVE the new chapter "Flower Girls"!!! I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT, I JUST KNEW it wasn't over!! It couldnt possibly be that easy!! I just love the way you write; eventhough i knew something was gonna happen i was not expecting it to happen so soon! And in front of Sherry's kids?! OMG i was having a fit! And the part where the guys were talking to the lawyer... it was awesome, i was cheering them as they stormed out the office! The story is so very good, you MUST continue! OOO im just itching to know what happens! Keep it up, youre on a roll!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AppallinglyCopacetic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Such an intense story. I think I see what's going on now. The human was just a tool, a distraction. What will the real stalker think of her being mated to Gavin!? Can't wait to read more of your excellent fanfic.
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Title: last two chapters
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya there!!!! =) yay! Charity was in the the previous chapter!!! yay me!!! i like that character(its mostly because she has my name) hee hee ... all i can say right now is WOW!!!! i was so glad that they had caught Mickey B. but i seemed a little too easy to me.... and then i read the next chapter and i am all like "HUH?????" " I DON'T GET IT I THOUGHT THEY CAUGHT THE BAD GUY!!!" hee hee i woke my baby brother who was sleeping... mom wasn't happy... any way.... i love the suspense... well.. i guess we'll all have to wait until tomorrow to know whats going to happen.... good job writing and please keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:16 PDT
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I had a feeling something like that was going to happen in this chapter. Oooh, Gavin is not going to be happy. And he's youkai! Cain, send your future son-in-law after him; it's time to see Gavin in action! Hahaha.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was so awesome! I figured that the Mickey B. that Inuyasha and the others had captured wasn't the real Mickey B. Because I remember in one of the earlier chapters Mickey B. was a bob cat youkai? Or something like that. Or... maybe Im just on crack. lol. Anyway. That was an awesome chapter, as were the previous ones before it. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:48 PDT
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Evil cliffhanger Sueric....very evil...I had something else to say but I forgot it because of all your evilness...evil...*shudders* just plain evil... truly remarkably undoubtably evil...
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:11 PDT
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I haven't reviewed in a while... Hmm. The suspense is killing me! Who is that youkai? I wonder if he's the one at the beginning who screwed up her car in Cancun... Kyaaa! Gavin, get your ass in gear and go save her!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 08:35 PDT
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Darn it!!! Jillian's been kidnapped?! How the heck did they mix up Mickey B. w/ that human if the guy that just took Jillian is Mickey B.? Gavin is NOT going to be happy when he finds out. I say that when Gavin hunts him down he should be allowed to do whatever he wants to the jerk. After all, Mickey B. is youkai, so they don't have to follow the human authorities legal system, do they?(yes, I am grinning evilly here b/c this guy is an *ss)
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Title: I knew it!
Reviewed By: PurpleNeko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! When I read the last one there's a lot of questions in my head and a lot of thoughts too, like the stalker is supposed to be youkai and catching the "stalker" in the previous chapter was so easy, the characters can't go that easily. Is that youkai the real Mikey B. then? Wonder what would happen to Jillian? Hope she'll be ok! Great chapter and you really got me doubting that last chapter, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as ya thinkl everythings fine this stuff happens. Yo but thats what aslo makes youre stories intrestin... the suprise factor.
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Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 00:28 PDT
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Hello again Sue. I haven't been able to review for about a month because our computer caught a virus and had to be replaced. Anyway, I just read the last twenty or so chapters nonstop, and I've gone through every emotion possible in about an hour's time. Your writing has a quality that almost forces your readers to feel everything the characters are going through. Wonderful work as always. I did feel that the whole stalker capture scene was a bit anti-climactic. I figured he'd end up causing a lot more trouble than he did, but then this new chapter comes. Suddenly it seems the trouble is just getting started. I can't wait for your next chapters, now that I can read them again. Keep up the excellent work, and happy writing!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:28 PDT
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Oh s*** Poor Jilli. I knew you had something else up your sleeve. um if you want I can make a 'weapons' family tree. if you just send me the info on them. I'd be more than happy to.
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