| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've spent the last few hours catching up on what I've missed over the last few months and I'm really happy that I did. This fan fiction is turning out great so far.
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:31 PDT
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Once again you blow us all away with your amazing way of making your characters jump out of the computer screen and scream their emotions at us. So much so that we feel their emotions on our own person. Excellent excellent chapter. I'm wondering is Jilli going to have a near death because of Gavin's rejection??
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:58 PDT
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Aww, that last line of the chapter almost made me cry. Poor Jillian! Hmm, I wonder what that guy is going to do with that picture. I like the sound of Gavin's apartment though; very high tech!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Gavvie is so good with those girls! Great Chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay all through this story I;ve been well close to tears and I feel so bad for Jillian. Poor4 girl she just can't catch a break. You always do a wonderful job of bringing out emotions from your readers, great chap.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gavin can be the biggest idiot sometimes. Wonder when he'll realize how much they really are meant for each other. Can't wait for the new chapter! Keep up the good work Sue!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:43 PDT
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this is so frustrating!!!!! WHY can't he just confront her about it! He is DYING inside...and still he's being stuborn for no REASON! Damn Dog! lol..sorry....it's just...ARGH! lol...i really really thought they were making headway...and then BOOM! he just goes back to square one...and ruins everything! But, with this being your story & it being only Ch16..i should've known it was a short lived victory for Jillian! :p lol.. And..Woa...the whole movie rental thing....i think they should get started on inventing that NOW! How'd you come up with that...i wish it worked like that now...i always leave it till the last day to watch my movies...lol anyways...thnks for the update...eagerly waiting for more :p!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 13:36 PDT
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Aahhh!!!Gavin & Jillian really, really, really need to talk. Jillian needs to handcuff Gavin to a chair or something & not let him go until he tells her the truth. This is getting sooooo frustrating because he's making assumptions that are completely unfounded. Although Jillian is doing the same thing. On a side note, I want to say that I sympathise with that girl who's sister is having a hard time w/her pregnancy. I have a friend who's in the hospital on bed rest b/c she's too high risk to be at home.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 12:10 PDT
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Thank you very much, Sue. Gah, I just want to shake some sense into Gavin! I couldn't believe he did that, but then again, I should have seen it coming. When you wrote the part about him taking out the ring I thought he was going to give it to her, well I hoped he would have.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 10:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. Gavin. Smarten up would ya? It's so sad, he wants to be with her but he's pushing himself away. T_T Awesome chapter. Keep up the great work! =D
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 06:33 PDT
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that almost made me cry...poor Gavin, he even had the RING!!! argh! it makes me mad to think that Jillian wanted to marry Gavin out of highschool & Gavin had the ring and was going to propose! where did it go wrong?!?!...lol... I don't really blame Gavin anymore for having a wall up...poor guy...:(...and i'm sure Jillian had a good reason to run of like...my guess...ANOTHE GIRL...itz always another girl! hehe... Awww...Cody's girls are SO CUTE...i love Karis! it was a really cute chapter... Oh...one more guess...I wonder if Mickey B. is related to Cody somehow....hmmmm....hehehe.... Thanks for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 21:46 PDT
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It's been awhile huh? LOL. I'm home from college and looking for a job as well as getting a phone line set up in my room has taken forever. But your story's always brighten my day especially with Jillian's likeableness (I doubt that's a word). Gavin makes me feel so sad when he talks like he's not worth her if he only knew right LOL. Great Chap as always. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE horsies too! lol...Cody's kids are so CUTE!!! Poor Jilli...all she wants is a family, and poor Gavvie...all he wants is Jilli! What a predicament...can't wait for you to resolve it! Thanks for the new chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 16:53 PDT
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Man, Gavin is not going to be happy at all when he finds out this mysterious guy has been in his apartment. Hmm, I wonder what he'll do. I was wondering, would you mind praying for my sister? She's a high risk pregnancy and even though she feels fine, her blood pressure isn't. Thank you if you can! It means a lot!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last two chapters were great. Cody's kids are so cute! :D
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