| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! Poor Cody never say her coming! lol...Jilli must really need some help if shes asking a guy she just met....and I was wondering if thats what Cody thought, that Gavvie was "that way"...it makes since. Well except for the fact that he almost kissed our Jillian! Can't wait to see how she gets him to notice her...keep up the good work! Thanks for the chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 15:22 PDT
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Awww. Poor Jillian is feeling really bad. She really hasn't figured out why Gavin won't date her. She's so confused she's asking shy, married men for help. It was extremely funny when she asked Cody for advice. And even funnier when he asked the other guys if Gavin was "that way". I was laughing so hard my sides hurt!
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 14:51 PDT
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Haha! Nice one pulling the change your voice to fool people gag. I really didn't think that Gavin would actually think that Jillian was Evan. That was a shocker. Also, I think Evan has a little too much up his sleeve to be thinking aobut trying to get Jillian and Gavin together, but it is pretty obvious that Gavin has a thing for Jillian. Before I close this message, do you think you can e-mail me a description of each character, excluding the main ones from the original tv show? When I get to reading something I usually remember everything, but I guess I forgot about their physical features. So, how about it? My e-mail is Jelai91@msn.com. I'd really appreaciate it. And KEEP WRITING!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 11:54 PDT
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I'm like Jillian in this chapter...when you need advice about a guy you like...ask another guy lol. Mmm...I want some of those fire cracker popcicles! That was too funny when Jilli was searching for Gavvie's keys, poor guy lol.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This is Jaxomruth. I realize that I haven't written a review to one of your stories in a very, very long time but I have followed each and every one of your Inu-yasha fics. I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your work. I have a lot of issues in my life for the past year or so and reading your stories was often the highlight of my day. It gave me something positive to look forward to when a lot of things were spinning out of my control. You have made a real different in my life even though we have never met. Please do not take this information as an attempt to place any pressure on you; rather it was done to express my gratitude for what you have done for me. I will continue to follow your writing, regardless of what path it may take. I am not usually very fond of OCs but your stories seem to be the exception to the rule. Your characters are so well developed and in line with the original characters that it is easy for me to forget that you created them.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 18:20 PDT
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*grins like and idiot* this was too cute! oh my...you had me on the edge of my seat! wondering if they were going to kiss OR whether Gavin would snap out of it…LOL..i guess this answered my question from before...THEY ARE MATES!!! Awww...i'm so exited!!!...i wonder how Gavin's going to be all awkward around Jillian now....knowing him..YES!. On another note...Gavin and Moe are so ADORABLE...they're so ALIKE...how they blush for ANYTHING & EVERYTHING...loved it! (as you can see..) BTW..thnx for letting me know about Desideratum...much appreaciate it... Bye Sue!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! Gavin is breaking down! That was just a really sweet moment! Figures that his dad would interupt! Suck! And I love how Evvie comes off so sweet even when he's takling vulgar! I love that guy! I love this chapter....Thanks Sue!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeee*! Awesome chapter! The part with Gavie and Jili was just awesome! Cant wait for the next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:03 PDT
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DAMN YOU!!! I actually htought htey were gonna kiss and you took it away GRAR!!! I am frustrated with those two...god...hurry up and finish the next chapterof Desideratum i luv that story. Peace out
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 11:38 PDT
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Aww, Moe, why'd you have to walk in at that time? Lol, Evan with his Lei-me, that's a good one!!! Thank you George Lucas for making such wonderful characters for Sue to terrorize lol. Ah, finally out of high school...next stop A.A. degree....Oooh, and a chapter coming up for Desideratum, awesome!!!!
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Title: Brotherly Love
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan is a BadAss and I love it! Also love the fortune cookies in the story, that was too funny! Now hopefully Gavin will get his head out of his ass about being Jillian's mate. Great updates, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 07:57 PDT
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Ahhhh! If Moe hadn't shown up he'd probably be well on his way to having grandkids, Evan calling or no! I don't suppose that nay of your stories could ever be that simple, just not heart wrenching enough.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You heard him Gavin...stop dicking around! lol! It cracks me up that Evan would send Gavin a box of "homemade fortune cookies"! Thats just TOO funny! Thanks for the new chapters Sue...I'm really loving them! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 09:30 PDT
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Does this mean that Gavin is finally going to have to admit that Jillian is his mate? I hope so because he's making himself & Jillian miserable by assuming that Jillian doesn't really love him. I mean, how much plainer can the girl be that she is in love with him? It's not like she dates different men or is really flirty with anyone but him so he really has no real reasons to doubt her. Plus, Jilian's not a liar so why is he being so obstinant? Grrr!! And, I ALSO noticed that you sidestepped my questions about Evan & Maddison. That was mean, like taking away my morning coffee. Just plain evil! So, am I to assume that they are not mates? If they aren't then will you be writing a story where Maddison gets a mate because I like her character. Yes, I know I'm hounding you on this. What can I say, I'm the oldest of three so I've learned to whine & plead with the best of them.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 20:46 PDT
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great chapter...why am I not surprised...lol anyway, thanks for the reply
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