| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:17 PDT
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lol!! oh evan. what wont you do? ;)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:13 PDT
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Hmm...Could it be that the Mickey B. guy was putting the hole in whosever car it was? Aww, poor Jilli, she can't go out in the rain just yet lol.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:11 PDT
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Sweet chapter, only those emails were kinda scary. Reminded me of wheni was twelve and had a stalker :S scary shyt. WEl written sounds like an interesting plot though I wanna slap the characters for not realizing and accepting the inevitable...lol
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Reviewed By: sweetsauve [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:06 PDT
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I love your entire Purity collection. They're all so well written and I can actually picture what is going on in my had. You do some amazing work. I was just wondering who the rest of your Purity stories are going to be about?
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far! I love how you're updating so quickly again - it makes me so happy when I see the notification in my email. ^_^ Especially since I've finished all of your other work... I also thought that I'd point out a typo for you - it's in the part where Jillian wakes up and is wondering if humans can hear the rain. I'm pretty sure that you meant to write "mortals" instead of "morals." :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 13:11 PDT
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oooh....Mickey D. is probably a youkai. That makes him even more dangerous than a typical stalker. Lol...Evan seems to get a funny mention in almost every chapter.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 12:59 PDT
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I love Jillian she is so sweet! And who's Gavin kidding they are so mates. I mean they sleep together, he can't be without her. It's really so cute. I know Sue that you said that you wouldn't be updating as often but I'll still be waiting for another Chap. Great work as alway's.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 12:52 PDT
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Gavin is so sweet. ^^ Jillian's lucky. And Evan is hilarious. ^^
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 11:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very freaky, with the Mickey D. emails. Thanks for the update!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:44 PDT
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So Jillian's a water youkai, huh? Cool! ^^ I think I'm really going to enjoy this one, not that I don't love all your work, but I digress... Great chappie! ^^
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. I can see how much Jillian cares for Gavin and how much Gavin cares for her, even though he won't admit it to himself. I was just curious, what type of youkai are Jillian and Gavin? I know Jillian is a water based but what kind? Did you mention it in one of the other Purties and I may have missed it? I was just curious. Keep up the good work and I look foreword to more. ~Toby
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:19 PDT
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IIIIII So love you to death right now. I've been sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for you to update. Jillian reminds me so much of Gin. Her kind heart and bubbly nature. I love her and Gavin's relationship, and what's his deal hpw come he doesn't belive that he's Jilli's mate?
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 17:43 PDT
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i like this story already (heh, as if i wouldnt like anything you wrote - btw your belated april fools joke had me in tears i was laughing so hard BRILLIANT WORK!) its so drastically different because jillian says they are already mates, and i think thats what i find so interesting about it, now to see how she convinces gavin, that will be interesting! cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Awesome chapter! Cant wait for the next one... and I hope Gavin finds her necklace.
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Title: Aaaawwww....
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 10:54 PDT
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I have a feeling I'm going to adore this story!! I love all your stories, and I get so excited when you post new chapters! Did you know that I check my email countless times a day looking for your updates...not that I expect you to update that much, but that's how much I love your writing!! Ugh, I sound like a crazed fan don't I? Oh well, it's just so darn fun...anyway...I'm going to go obsess over Purity 6 now...and dream about Mikio...aawwww I love his twitchy left ear! So cute. so cute!! I hope we'll get to see him some in Purity 6... huggles Mikio...aaahhhh
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