| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 08:07 PDT
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I can't believe that P5 is almost over already! Still, I can't wait to see how P6 unfolds. Would you believe that I was actually thinking about this story this morning, Sueric? I know that sounds weird, but... I was wondering about when it would next be updated and then, to my utter surprise, there's the notification in my inbox. I was so excited. ^^ Thank you so much for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: Welcome To Mexico
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am already hooked on this story so bad that it's not even funny. I kept reading the first chapter over and over again especially the part where Gavin tells Jillian that he's transferring to Maine to be closer to her. Awww, he wants to keep being Jillian's hero, but doesn't like the idea of her being with another man. This is going to be a really sweet and funny story based on being best friends. I am loving Jillian and Gavin's characters alot. Thanks for the update and take care.
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Title: Runs in the family?
Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:42 PDT
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Wow, this was just interesting... Sounds a bit like the whole Nez/Ryo deal. :) They're very cute couple... Kinda couple. XD I love how you've started to set up things here. It's very intriguing! Can't wait to read more Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:19 PDT
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Aww, well, I've read your stories a million times to know that if a youkai recognizes its mate then the other one has to as well; but it's sad to think that Gavin believes he won't be that guy for Jillian. I loved her eating habits lol, I'd be doing the same thing.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 00:58 PDT
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First off thanks for that tip on the refresh. ive been fighting that for so long now lol. Great chapter, Im glad you said here phantasm was done, i wasnt sure or not hehe. but now im exicted to see how gavin and jilli get along. you hinted to alot of things between them in phantasm and all so now its going to be great to go in depth. till next chapter :)
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Title: Thanks for the Answers
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 00:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, most interesting. I know its early in the story, but its still rather intriguing. Like Phantasm, you kept me on the edge with that one, trying to figure things out and you're gonna do it again with this one. But I love it all the same. And thanks much for answering my questions. I really didnt who was what and that. Thanks! Update when you can.
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Title: I love it!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 21:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, this is the first time i have ever written a review for one of your works; but i wanted to know that i am a HUGE fan!! Especially of the "Purity" series, im up to #6! And i luv it already!! You write so well and so vividly, i wish they would make movies out of your stories. (u should run the idea by them...lol. what happens to the Inuyasha gand after Naraku is gone, and let it follow the "Purity" series! ^_^) NEVER EVER stop writing!! And pleeeeeeeease update #6, im dyin to continue this series! This wont be the last you hear of me! Thanks for the wonderful stories!! ^_^ Kitty BoBo aka Jessica
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Title: Purity 6: Shameless
Reviewed By: mocahoney [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 00:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how much I love you. I'v been off the internet throughout the whole writing of Purity:5. I just finished it at 3:48 in the morning april 13/ Not bad, 10 hours. Write more please and be proud that you may be the reason I need glasses from sitting so close to the screen. Also be happy that I have to get a cusion for this F-in chair cause me sitting down for long periods of time is your fault. You do that to people ya know. That's mean. Just mean. Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! Write! I know it's sad. I'm getting help.
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Reviewed By: xiamurgodx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 15:40 PST
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great chapter, im so excited that you started a new story!! Just one question that im so confused on. Who are gavin's parents? who are jillian's parents? ahh, my brain is going to explode. going back to purity 5 to figure it out...
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 09:07 PST
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haha I have finaly caught up in your stories. *sigh* It took me forever, with work and school. but here I am all up in the flow of chapters again. wow. this story already sounds amazing. Cant wait to read somemore.
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 04:19 PST
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hey... the colors changed. Das cool. How ya manage that one? Is it new?
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 09:58 PST
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That was Awesome! Hehe. A story between Jilli and Gavvie. This should be interesting! =D Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 08:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you go up to purity 200 just for me? please? I LOVE all you're Purity continuations, your descriptions are so vivid and wonderful. Usually when people write something about Inuyasha's children, it's crap. But your stories are absolutly wonderful. I especially like this Purity because I've been wondering since Phantasm what happens/happened between Jillian and Gavin. There's only one thing I'm wondering: in your second purity, I think you mentioned that Toga had a sister, and she married a youkai. Since then, I've noticed in the following Purity's that when there are family gatherings, and the like, that Toga's sister is never present. I'm just wondering what ever happened to her. Keep up the excellent work, you will always have my vote of confidence. -White Raven
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 08:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I thought I had left a review the first time you posted.. silly me, probably did write one and didn't submit it 0.o; Onward to the important part! I'm so happy to see Purity continue on for another storyline. I can tell this one will be another one to add to my on-going Purity favs; just by reading the first chapter too! Plus we all know just how Gavin and Jillian are sooo meant to be! Looking forward to reading more of P6 and of course P5 in the meantime!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 20:20 PST
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Oh crap, I meant I can already tell THAT it will be an interesting story.
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