| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 18:17 PDT
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You know I almost feel sorry for him - pulling this when Cain, Inuyasha, Ben and Gavin are all together and already pissed ... almost. I also was wondering - do any of your future fanfics ever include a human male pairing with a youkai female? I was thinking about this the other day and how intimidating the pack is to Gavin and how much worse that would be fore a human - also if a human male would even be accepted. Then I started thinking about what a great character that would be. However, I must admit that I love the "knight in shining armour" that the inu's tend to be. Anywho ... thought I would thow that out there. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sue..u are soooo sneaky...that seemed too easy, something isnt right......hmmmm haha anyways great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 15:54 PDT
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I kinda feel sorry for Mickey B. He has to deal with a lot of tempermental people lol. I kinda wished that Gavin would have caught him and gave him a punch here and there lol. HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 08:31 PDT
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Aww That didnt answer nearly enough of my questions...guess Ill wait for tomorrow. Just how early do you upload these things? Maybe I sleep in too late or something. So right now I'm thinking weapons...you've got the family tree thing on your site I think you should make a chart with everyones weapons cause thats what intices me the most. Like each characters weapon of choice, its attributes, its name that'd be flippin sweet. Well I always end my reviews the same way so.........Peace out.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well....she knows. i wonder when or how they'll figure out the stalker isnt human. hmmmm....something to think about. anyway....HAPPY 4th OF JULY!!!!
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 15:54 PDT
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Thanks Sueric! I must have mised the description, somehow. Another great chapter. I thought Jilli would get pissed about not knowing, but I like the 'my hero' bit alot better. I sure hope the men of the family, can control themselves when they find this Mikey.
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 14:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i cnat believe Jillian FINALLY found out...but that means Mickey B knows shes at the ranch..hopefully if he goes there then Evan and the "old man" will ge to him first...i cant wait !!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 11:58 PDT
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Wow, all the tension in the air...this human guy better run for his life because he's gonna have to deal with the whole family when they get him! Poor Jilli, I knew she'd find out some day; but that way was sad.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 11:00 PDT
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My computer is so screwed up right now its not even funny. Some days when my internet doesnt work I have to get my own friend and Beta reader to send me the chapters via Messenger. I'm glad to have her, I dont know what I'd do if I couldnt read this story. This chapter kinda seemed like the guy was on the ranch...I suspect Cody but that seems almost TOO evil for you and completely illogical. Still you never know...you are one crazy Person Sueric afterall. Hopefully ill find out tomorrow. Peace out.
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 06:02 PDT
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YOU GO GIRL!!! GET YOUR MAN!! AWW, THAT WAS COMPLETELY AWESOME!! WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:52 PDT
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HA! that was funny. i noticed that despite the fact that jillian is adopted, she has traits of cain that his blood children would, blue eyes, blond hair, her penchant for being nude without shame (Bellaniece.lol) and to add to that all of cains children adopted or otherwise are perverts. lmao. except maybe bas hes a bit on the shy side of it all. i have a question. what is the relationship between evan and inuyasha as well as evan and the rest of his family i'm a bit confused about that? i adore evan, i wonder if he and madison will eventually become mates, i just dont see evan taking a mate or madison taking a mate thats not each other and then the other being okay with it, however unattactched they are. i can twait to read evans story. anyways another great chapter, and oh lord inuyasha is gonna raise hell i can see it now. oh one more thing? why hasnt mikio been taught to fight, is it because hes so clumsy? ( i noticed hes the only one of inuyasha and kagomes sons that calls inuyasha papa, its cute)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. An apperance from Inuyasha! :D I cant wait to see what havoc Evan and Inu come up with. lol. And Mikio... is he getting sick or something? Anyway. Great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 12:25 PDT
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I love Gavin. He's so cute. And it looks like Gavin & Jillian better get ready for Inuyasha & Evan invading their peace & tranquility. With those two around I doubt that there's going to be much peace. And WHAT is going on w/Mikio? Why is he sick?
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Title: Ride her Cowboy
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 07:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....Ride her Cowboy! lol....I Loved this chapter! We even heard from the old farts (Inuyasha and Kagome)! ^_^ Oh, and something is on my mind, doesnt it seem unfair that youkai can compete in things like rodeos? I mean, of course they'll perform better than any human, they're stronger than any human. Anyway....thats not important! Thanks so very much for the update Sue....I Really Loved It! ^_^
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