| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 20:42 PDT
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i'm stealing the word "runt-fucker"!!!!!!! ::runs for Teh Border!::
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 19:18 PDT
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Evan is certainly one of your more interesting characters. Seems like there is more to him than he leads you on to believe. Can't wait to read Purity 9 and find out more about him =) Hope you update again soon! I'm really enjoying this story =)
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Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chap! i kinda feel 4 evan everyone just left him out well at least he has maddy. **wink, wink** Sue's #1 and remeber vote 4 Pedro
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:15 PDT
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Mike Murphy? Coincidence that that happens to be the name of an uncle of mine who died before I had the chance to meet him. I'll call this one now. Mike Murphy is Mickey B. I knew there had to be a reason you posted that picture of Evan in this story, so I shouldnt have been surprised when this chapter was appropriately named 'Evan' I'm gonna ballpark it and say Evan leads Mike Murphy directly to his darling little sister. I feel bad for Evan and am desperately dying to know just why he and Sebastien had such a great falling out between the two of them. I might also guess Bone is Mickey B just because he asked if he knew where Jillian was. That's enough of my musings for now. I got a hell of a lot of work to do if I ever plan on entering that contest...Peace out Humphrey. Deceptress
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 15:58 PDT
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Wow, how bad can one person get? Yikes...Evan kinda scares me now lol. That was funny with the phone though, not that it almost hit Maddy, just that it went flying.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 13:22 PDT
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Poor, poor Gavvie. He really is shy around women, isn't he? Dating Jillian may not cure that b/c if he dates her Jillian will probably kill any girl who looks at him. Gavin may as well get a tatoo right now that says "property of Jillian Zelleg".But she was very creative on finding a way to get him to date her. I can't wait to see what their first date is like.
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Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww poor gavvie. i thnk that was a great chap i kinda feel bed for gavvie though i loved it Sue's # 1 and remember Vote For Pedro!!!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D Wonderful couple of chapters! Cant wait for more! ^-^
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 05:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. gavin seems to be ina hell of alot of trouble now. haha. Anyway you yet again amaze me with what you can do. Qusetion non related to your story. Do you know of any other website besides Ear-Tweak that translates the Inuyasha Shonen Sundy?
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 06:11 PDT
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I gotta admit that I'd probably die if that ever happened to me or happened to someone I was in a bar with. Although it just now occured to me that maybe...perhaps Jillian knew what she was doing and did all that solely so that she could get Gavin to date HER. Seems the kind of devious thing that runs through Cain's household. I had a question but seemed to have forgotten it...oh well...keep it up Sueric oh yes iIm thinking of entering the latest contest...but thats beside all points.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 20:21 PDT
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Aww poor Gavvie, he's all tongue-tied around that girl; I felt so bad. Oooo, Gavvie and Jilli dating...sounds beautiful lol.
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is killing me! I love how this story is progressing, but I find myself unable to stop from constantly checking my email for an update. I am really falling in love with this story. Extremely well done, as always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you ever need an alternate title for chapter 8, I'd use "And that's when Gavin's brain broke..." Great chapter to an already excelent story. Thanks for writing such good stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 12:55 PDT
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Oh, poor Gavin.
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