| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
| Pages (26): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 00:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, and I hope reviews don't efect your continued writing. Anyway, I can't wait for the next one. ^^ Ja ne, Kurisu
|
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 20:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aww, the ending to this chapter was cute. Hmm...a thunder-based youkai in this chapter, and yet in Chapter 3: The Million Dollar Girl there was a youkai who had the power of electricity; very suspicious. At least to me anyways lol. I wonder if I should keep the name Henson Collings in mind.
|
Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am seriusly loving this storry please update it soon
|
Title: Montana Skies
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 10:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many little details, especially the info on Gavin's and Jillian's back story, that I like. I think it's really cool how they came to know one another and have a very unique relationship/friendship. Great update, Sue!
|
Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 05:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for my lack of reviews, but if I read your story and I am not already signed in I cannot post a review even if I try and sign in and come back to it. Its gay like that. Excellent chapter, looks like Gavin's got some secrets...
|
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 13:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
I knew something like that was going to happen with that car. I just hope nothing happens while Gavin is at the store.
|
Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Question, this is kinda off topic about the chapter but this reminded me of something...if Cain's real name is Zelig...then why doesn't Gin call him that, I know he changed his name..but its his real name. Wouldn't you think that his close family would call him by his real name? I know its a stupid question but i really want to know. And Nezumi miscarried!!! Omg! Well, have fun writing
|
Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 12:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. So, Jillian has a stalker and now she is going to see Gavin's ranch. Um...I was wondering, what do Gavin and Jillian look like? I mean, I'm not an artist or anything, but I think I could draw them.
|
Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter Sue! I cant wait to find out who this stalker is. :( and poor Nezumi...
|
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
I can tell already that this Purity Chapter will be one of my all time favs. I was so happy to see you had updated, I needed a break from studying for finals and this did me some good. Great Chap
|
Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 08:33 PDT
Comment/Review:
Love your stories as always. But I do have a quesiton? What ever happened to Kagome's family? I would assume that Souta got married and had children, so are you going to include them anywhere? Just curious Thanks for being willing to share Deb
|
Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 01:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
You might not remember me because I haven't been able to review in about 5 months. I just finished Phantasm and I loved it. Now I look forward to reading your new story, which has already captured my full attention. I can't wait to see who this stalker is and what he "really" wants. I think he may have an agenda other than just manic fandom, but that's me. Anyway, I had a couple questions I was hoping you could answer. First, since you've said that Shameless is set in the year 2066(?), then that would make InuYasha and Kagome about 80 years old, minus the years on the tree which don't really count. Do they still look the same as they did in Purity, or have they aged any? I know that youkai and hanyous live much longer than humans normally do, so I figured they would age slower as well, but I was wondering if they have aged any or if they still look as young as their now-adult children (lol). Also, I have been planning to write my own fanfiction in the near future. I'm not sure if the idea that hanyous can only reproduce on certain nights (full moon/new moon) was yours or not, but I wanted to ask permission to use this in my story just in case. If it is, please let me know if this is a problem because I don't want to plagarize(sp?) your work without your permission. Anyway, I know this is long-winded, but keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the rest of this story.
|
Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
jilli and gavie at his ranch....alll to themselves...hehehehe...this is going to be interesting! I was going to ask you about jillian's parents and what happened to them, but i guess thats part of her "secrets"...u know, i think i'm already very fond of this couple from the purity series! I just love them all! your the BEST!!!! hehehe....sorry....just had to do that...anyways...eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ~Nish
|
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know that the author of a piece is doing a good job when you hear something like "Aunt Nezumi miscarried" and imedietly think "Kich must be devistated!" Thanks to all the prior Purity stories I know all the families in each progressive story and I genuinely feel for each of them. I love your work and I hope to follow it all the way up at least Purity 12 (or was it 13 you expected to finish up at?)
|
Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy you made another Purity. This should be interesting since Gavin claims that he is not Jillian's mate. I'm looking forward to the surprises you have for us readers.
|
| Pages (26): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] |
