| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:47 PDT
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Oh poor baby I feel so bad for Jilli. But can't what to hear what Gavin has to say for hisself. And Brandon was a big meanie for starting the whole dang thing. Great Chap hope you update soon. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:22 PDT
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Okay, I've started to review now... Ooo, now let's see Gavvie's reason!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a bit, puter of mine was FUBAR for a couple weeks and it still isnt quite right, so Im still trying to play catch-up with everything. Love the story, and almost thought Gavin was gonna give in there with Jilli for a sec on that one chapter, that is till Hank showed up. Great timin there Hank, lol. Think maybe Ive finally caught up here now. I kept wondering what it was that got Gav stuck in the doghouse, interesting. Anyways, great chapter and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 08:19 PDT
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Man Gavin really shot himself in the foot didn't he? These two are on a longer and harder rollercoaster ride than Inuyasha and Kagome were. I feel for them. At least they're figuring it out though. Me, I'm still looking for that perfect someone, and if you weren't taken I'd ask you. Anyways, thanks for the chapters and the PDFs on your website I really enjoy having them to go over again. Ja ne, Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 06:32 PDT
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I loved this chapter!! I can't wait to read the next so we can see Gavin's reaction to what Jilli told him. I have this suspition that it wasn't a date (although it sounds like Shelly would have liked it to be) but he was her partner in something for school, or he was tutoring her. I hope to be able to red it soon!! Love your work!!
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Title: hehe...oops
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha me agian..i really meant to give u all 10 out of 10's...so here i go again
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Title: arrrrgh!!
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kno..its wrong that ur sooo good at leaving us killer cliffhangers....im literally pulling my hair out to find out what Jilli is gonna say!!!! its a complete waste for me to ask u to update soon, since u do anyways...but still, I CANT WAIT!! LoL great fic btw....
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've reviewed even though I've read all your Purity fanfics, save Purity (I feel bad...), and I HAVE to say that you are an amazing writer, you're plots and characters are so original and they seem to have a life of their own! Purity 3: Forever was the one that got me hooked, but my favourites areJustification and soon-to-be Shameless. The conflicts, whether they be man vs. man or man vs. himself (Cain and Gavin) have always turned out amazing and the results, awe-inspiring. The couples you put together are just so cute! I can't wait to read Evan's and Gunnar's. I'm frankly amazed that you've got these stories all plotted out in your head and that you're actually making all 12 or something (I can't remember the exact number). What I actually reviewed for is because I was wondering if you could give me the names of Toga's and Sierra's children. (I've got Gunnar and Coral.) I'm making a family tree. ^^ There are so many lines here and there, crisscrossing over thatta ways. It's confusing, but I love ALL the characters and they're relationships with the others and their mates. leeksandmisosoup ^^ P.S. I completely heart your "mating marks" and "inner youkai"s!
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:42 PDT
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This is very suspenseful. I really want to know what happened that Christmas. Also, Gavin finally knew what aould happen to him when he doesn't take control of the beautiful things around him. Anyways, keep writing. I hope what Jillian says will help Gavin to tell her that he loves her and will give her that half diamond necklace that she so rightfully deserves. I'm still working on the pics. As soon as I get my hands on a scanner I'll post them. Bye!!
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Reviewed By: sweetsauve [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:17 PDT
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That is an evil cliffhanger!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! This is the cruellest cliffhanger that I have ever seen, yet I am forced to appreciate your genius. Extremely well done, as always.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 12:29 PDT
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Oh you are so bad leaving me with that cliffy. I was getting so giddy when I realized that there wasn't anymore story. LOL. I'm on the edge of my seat I hope you update soon. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Thats so cute! And poor Gavvie...he had to run away to deal with his...problem! This was such a good chapter...can't wait to see how Jilli explains her absence that many years ago. Hopefully it'll strengthen their relationship...having the truth out i mean. Loved the update Sue! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:23 PDT
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All I can say right now is poor, poor Gavin. The man must be a saint for not touching Jillian before now. How did he survive all those years. Jeesh! I feel for him, I do, and I'm not even a guy. It also looks like he and Jillian are going to have "the talk"- the one they've been needing to have for years now. I forget, have you explained why Jillian withdrew from Gavin for those 2 years, or are we going to find that out soon? On a side note I'm wondering when Jillian is going to find out that she has a stalker. Somehow I don't think she's going to thank the men in her family for keeping that tid bit of information from her.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:22 PDT
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NOOOOOO!!! Why'd it have to stop there? That's so sad! EVIL CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!
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