| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: itsaKTASTROPHE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 07:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter sooo much! i love the way you were able to sum up all of the Purity stories together and how each of the couples were currently doing or feeling. I just couldn't help but feel that when it's time for Mikio's story (he's having his own Purity Story right?) it would be really ironic if his mate turned out to be a gymnast of some sort because of his balance issues. So i was wondering if you could give me any type of hint??? eheh??? well anyways i love how this story is taking effect. i love all of your stories and how you weave each and every one of them so creatively and imaginatively.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: aww Gavin is a hero
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww Gavin!!! he is a hero!!! im so happy that everyone is all together on the ranch but with all the mix of generations and relations its hard to remember who's who....great chapter!!--but this seems like the end of Purity 6 *tear*
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! I loved the narrative technique going from couple to couple, and it was a nice way to check up on all the folks we know and love (as well as getting a look-in on some of the newer folk). And you write Sesshy so well, too, it's always a pleasure to see him turn up!
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:20 PDT
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Awsome chapter!! I loved the round-robin of everyone's relationship. You are right about BOTOX being all capitalized. I work for a company that designs websites for doctors. It's supposed to look like this: BOTOX® Cosmetic. (But since someone's saying it, they wouldn't say "BOTOX® Cosmetic".) Anyway, that's my education of the Sue for the day. ;) :D I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite chapters!!! It was great to see almost all of the characters. Especially Sesshomaru...... I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:43 PDT
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I've enjoyed reading this immensely. I hope for future review success in all of your fics. Everyone loves and adores your characterizations, and you do well in that respect. I wish you and anyone and everyone you know well. Good luck! *I Hope it helps in some way*
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 13:32 PDT
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okay i had a question about the previous chapter...i thought that at the end of purity5 bas and sydnie had 2 children...bailey and olivia but in the chapter cain spoke as if bas didnt have any children yet. can u clear that up for me? anyways this was a good chapter, it was really sweet how the whole family was together. i enjoyed the interaction and reading ur stories inspired me out of my writers block. so thanks for that. update again soon this purity has a great plot.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:05 PDT
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Woah! This is slightly getting creepy with all it's mysteries and freaky youkai research... Poor Jillian... She must be so upset. The bright side is she'll be getting married! You have done an immensely wonderful job bringing so many characters to life. I hope you continue to. ?leeksandmisosoup?
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 23:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! a chip!? an address!? her parents!? wow....lots of information in the last two chapters! I couldn't believe my eyes when I checked my mail and discovered the late night update....it made me soooo happy! lol....loved the update sue....thanks a lot!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:01 PDT
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Hmm....well, referring to the last thing in Cain's point of view, always go with your gut instinct right? It's usually the best way to go lol. Hmm....I'm really interested to find out what this research is.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. I couldn't believe Cain and Bas were arguing. Silly guys. lol. I really wish that Bas and Evan would get along though. It would be nice to see them actually seem to like each other. lol.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:23 PDT
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I felt so bad for Jilli when she started screaming at Bas and Cain. Gin just yelling at Cain was funny though! Reminded me of Kagome and InuYasha lol. Hmm....I wonder if Dr. Avis will talk now.
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Title: bio what?
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bio-chip...wow...nice twist...but now im like jumping up and down for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 09:59 PDT
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Heheh... are those things a reality today. I mean the Xytroph scanner and all. Or am i just thinking to much of it. Anyway excellent update
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