| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 14:59 PDT
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Whoop! Hurray! I thank you for this latest installment!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 03:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I could say is... wow. Very beautiful how you discribed everything in this chapter... Hell in this story. I can see how you put all your heart into to this and Im forever greatful to read this wonderful story you've created... Its good to see this updated and I hope it will be updated again. So for now just keep up the god work. Peace....
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Title: =^.^= kitty!
Reviewed By: lindy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I just found your fic a couple day ago and just couldn't stop reading! I love the ideas and situation that the characters keep getting themselves into. Looking forward to next time! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: July 03, 2008 17:14 PDT
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I must say I love the poetic way in which you write. It's simply beautiful and gives the story a lovely flow. On another note I'm really getting the feeling that some thing big is gonna happen between Inu and Kag is he gonna reveal that she's his mate soon? It feels like he might. Well please update soon ok I really love this story. Oh and don't worry about the long story thing I have just the opposite problem where I tend to rush my stories and the big moments all happen too soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 02:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things are going good for kagome and her training... and nice that inuyasha is there keeping watch... but now kagome has touched the jewel... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 16:10 PDT
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wow. intense at the end. nice job.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 14:52 PDT
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there's that foot again! . . . so moving, emotionally descriptive. you said a whole lot in this 'short' chapter. now that she's got it he's going to have to be extra careful to keep her safe. combine their power... the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. . . hope her sensai survives to complete her training but will the villagers want them around if they're going to attract the unwanted attention of all sorts of nasty creature after the jewel? . . . exciting, scary. ~ delighted, ginny
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Title: LandraBlaze
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update, I am looking forward to more chapters when you have the time. Keep up the good work! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 06:26 PDT
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holy shit. That;s all there is to say.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was rather morbid... I'll re-read this for you and see what I think of your writing style (I have the holidays so I am not doing much.... especially when no one else has updated... I've just been rereading Purity (I think I like 4 or 9 (Evan... drool... lol) or 8) so I'll be glad to give you a full detailed examination on you writing...) so far from what I can think you have done a lot better than some writers who start of REALLY well then for get about plot and stuff... or have really bad writing so you know you have done really well on those points
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 22:18 PDT
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Ominousnesses! Poor Inu! Poor Kagome! Now what! I will await patiently for the next dose to feed this lovely addiction!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah.... nice sarcasm in this chapter. Love it. And glad you updated, plus it made my day even btter than ever. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace.......
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad the little one napped long enough for you to update. It was worth the wait. Kagome's hero worship and desire to share her learning with Inuyasha echoes Souta's feelings toward Inuyasha. While her feelings are starting to deepen and develop more into a woman/man, Inuyasha's are already there but he doesn't seem to realize it fully yet. It was interesting to see how the elder from the village treated Inuyasha with interest and respect. And the Miko seems to treat him with kindness though he doesn't know how to react to that. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: May 19, 2008 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. But I'm seriously waiting for when Kagome finds out that Inu has marked her!!! She loves him back so I think it will be quite interesting and enlightening for Inuyasha. I do have one question though? Is Naraku going to show up in this story? I mean we haven't really met a bad guy yet except Kagome's old village. *shrug* guess I just have to wait and see. I would like an interaction between Inu, Kag, and her old village. Preferably after they have officially gotten together.
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 11:38 PDT
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*laughs* Well, aren't you the doting mother! Good chapter, thanks for making the update!
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