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Reviewed By: nekoyoukie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor naru-kun what will that seal do to him?? Oh I hope you update soon I can't wate.
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Title: Aoidragon
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man, *pouts* oh well, it's an awesome story, i can wait! ^^ update soon please! you're already on my favorites! :D
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kewl keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover On: August 23, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is by far the best fanfic I have ever read and have I read a lot!!!!!!!! Through my many hours of reading of your fanfic (lol).I have come to the Nauto fanfic even more so than befor !!!!!! (Helpful Hint. You need to remember that he is 12!!!!!! not some hot 17).Still awsome !!!!!!!!! Write more chapters!!!!!!! Okay ???!!! I am so looking forward to reading them!!!!!!!! sessy_lover
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Reviewed By: Teki On: August 21, 2006 02:20 CDT
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I love this so much! I just can't wait for the next chapter... Are there coupels? Please update fast!!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is sooo good it sould be sold for alot of money but i don't feel like paying so i will shut up and wait for your next update. (which i hope is soon) cause a person can almost die waiting trust me i know.. haha keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Demonrights On: August 19, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoultly love this fiction, it has so much detail and you explain everything so perfectly. I hope you update soon, cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: nekoyoukie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good fic I love it more and more every time I read it.I hope you keep righting.
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Reviewed By: Blackrose45213 On: August 13, 2006 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nicely written story, I look foward for the next chapter. Not to bug you or anything but there was a few spelling mistakes. Anyways keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: =D On: August 12, 2006 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool. please update more of this =)) thanks. p.s. you have awesome creativity w/ your stories =))))
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 07:14 CDT
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I am sorry to write this review but I started reading your story and couldn't force myself to continue past the middle of chapter2. The idea is wonderful, it's dark and gives the opportunity for many plot twists and the summary is what captured me. Unfortunately it seems the story rating and the summary don't show its real nature. I don't know if you have a beta or if you , as many authors, struggle for yourself but I'd say you need someone to keep your Naruto in line. His behavior is contradictory and many choices illogical - for one his sudden change of style while cool is too major, not to mention unfitting for someone who would be a ninja- a person always on the move and in fighting situations. Leather does not enable freedom of movement and all those chains you mention would only get in the way. An enemy could use them to catch him, they could snag somewhere, the clag could be heard when one of the main dogmas in the ninja way is not to be noticed. The same could be said for the earrings. As for the tattoos - getting 'some' tattoo simply because you like the look is inane and foolish seeing as a tattoo is a mark that could later be used to identify you and you are about to take Naruto into obscurity. As for the Shadow Assailant get-up, well this sounds like a flame already but I can't help and stare horrified at the mental picture of such impractical clothes. And last - your characters are too naive. No weapons dealer would simply pull some nobody who entered their shop, no matter how they look, and offer them their best merchandise or even show them the under-the-counter such. As for nine-tails - you should put an AU warning. They sound more like a guardian-angel than a bloodthirsty demon. Feel free to curse me but I hope despite everything I am helping so such inconsistencies could be cleared up and your fiction become better. I quite like the idea of the story as I already said and despite everything hope to perhaps read it if one day you decide to re-vamp it. XD
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Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man a cliffie!! I can't wait to read the next part now. I'm also watching naruto right now and I do believe that I like your interpretation better than the real thing :) Very good chapter. The naruto/shikamaru/neji friendship is great.
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Reviewed By: kyubii shadow On: August 09, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man i really love this story. Its one of the greatest ive ever read. but something is bugging me, and i may be the only one that doesnt know this. What did the scroll that Naruto used in wave country do. You never really explained what it did to naruto. other than that keep it up ill be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ari Underlined On: August 04, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of my favorite Naruto stories that I have ever read. I started reading simply because of the Itachi/Naruto pairing you listed in the summary, but that's not why I love it! You have created one of the most-fun-to-read fictions in this archive. I am crazy for more, so please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ElvenGirl On: August 02, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! I just wish you could update faster but, I know that you are doing your best. You keep me waiting for the next one. I love the whole kuubi/naruto secret. The way you portray the charachters is amazing. Over all it is really good...
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