| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: kera On: July 24, 2007 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic its been a while since i've read a fic with so great a story line. I look forward to reading more of this fic soon. Great job!!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, amazing, great job, really amazing! I don't know what else to say but that I can barely contain my excitement.
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Title: once agian wow
Reviewed By: tamsonight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you are truly an awsome writer i can hardly wait for more ^^
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Title: AW! I want more!!!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW! More more more!!! Hehehe. Hi! Hizashibudane! (Long time no see) I like. But even *I* have to say I hate the shortness. Well we'll both have more time after school lets out, ne? Need ideas? and or help? I'm bored right now and waiting for someone to send me SOMETHING to beta. SO I have alot of time on my hands right now. And even if I do post the next chap of Heading Home I'm not really sure how well it'll be received. So I'll post later. heh. So are you wanting help? Or no? cause like I said I'm bored. OH! Can I beta this? I found some errors that are really starting to bug me each time I re-read this. Please? and I would like to talk to you kinda soon. I'm probably going to be on later tonight or early tomorrow. So talk to me? Oh and Where's Zabuza? I thought that it was Zabuza that owed Naruto. He could have called in an entirely differant favor from just Haku instead of going through Zabuza. Thy didn't you just do that. I think that Zabuza would have understood that Naruto was calling in a favor from Haku instead of him wasting the favor from Zabuza. But that's just me. Love you and I'll talk to you later ok Shadow? bye-bye!!!
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Reviewed By: Kai28(not logged in) On: May 06, 2007 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooo soo short |P oh well keep up the good work Ill be waiting for your update.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 00:00 CDT
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this chapter was really good. i practically fell outta my chair when u said itachi was impersonating the kage gesshoku. that was funny. anyways, im really, really getting into this story. & im actually starting to lyk the slowness of the yaoi. it makes the bond between itachi & naruto and shikamaru & neji stronger. i hope u update this story really soon. this chapter got me really pumped to read the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: May 04, 2007 19:05 CDT
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Sorry I've been so silent lately RL has been a drag. However I have to say that the story is turning out nicely. And while PWP may be fun once in a while I really do prefer stories with plot. IE one of my favorite Harry Potter fanfics rewrote all the books up to number four and then wrote her own version of books 5-7, not only that but every single one was as long or longer then most books! So to the flamers out there I say KEEP YOUR SHIRTS ON!!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I was getting excited as soon as I saw that you had updated. I have been waiting anxiously for this to be posted. I agree with that whole PWP. I don't like those cause you just don't want the characters to start...doing each other with no real attraction first, or anything else that developed a relationship beyond sex. That's stupid! I was wearing my thinking hat in the last chapter so I did see that growing connection between Itachi and Naruto, soo cool n.n Also, I don't know if its cause I'm blind, but I didn't know there would be a SasuGaa pairing in this! I've never read that pairing before...sounds interesting, lol My favorite has to be NaruGaa though and then NaruGaa and sometimes GaaIta, lol Anywho, this was awesome cause it had a bit of Zabuza and Haku! woo! Loved it! Later!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:05 CDT
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WE ALL RESPECT YOUR ENORMOUS FLAMES OF YOUTH!!! *shudders violently and then hurls on the floor) Oh crap, I imitated a guy where green spandex! RUN AWAY! Lol, Anyway, I like the latest chapter (but that's two short chapters, with a months to wait in between em. This story is great, but that is a pretty damn long time time for only 5 pages. Still, I like the update, and I REALLY want a new, awesoem chapter. Please update soon, ok? Later
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 16:58 CDT
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THIS IS WAR!!!!!!!!! Loved the cahp. The way u wrote this cahpter. The war seems like its going to be very detailed and GREAT *not that i'm a fan of war* Can't wait for the next chapter. Zabuza and Haku are back!!! yay
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Title: omigod
Reviewed By: Mr. Q On: April 30, 2007 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it live it love it!!!!!!!!!! pleeeeze update!!!!!!!
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Title: NNNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Reviewed By: The_shadow_in_everyone's_heart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why won't you update!!!!!! WHY???? Oh, um this is dark_fallen_angel_of_hell incase you didn't know that I got a new name...so uh UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ChibiMoonPhantom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great and i reaaly like it...........but you said that there was goingto be yaoi and so far there really hasn't been any. I think that you should either put some in or take it out of the yaoi section. Also the last chapter was really short and I waited A MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for it so can you write another one really soon and make it really good and add yaoi becuase you said it was yaoi. Also if you don't write another soon then i'll flame you again and again until you do.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 18:38 CDT
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i still love this story. & i look forward to reading more chapters. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Kai28(not logged in) On: April 10, 2007 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V.V although as usual your stories are great but maybe it was me but you skipped march, just wondering about your health. Anyways hope you update soon.
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