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| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 ] | Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: April 20, 2006 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It felt to fast in some places and to slow in others, but other then that it was fun. I don't get the piercings although the tats were a cool idea. Hope you update soon.
| Title: Good Job.
Reviewed By: raigushiki On: April 19, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story, I think you should continue it, pat yourself on the back, you did some good. ja ne
| Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
First review, squee~ You've got some interesting concepts *nod* Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing that detracts from the story, which is always a good sign. The story itself is entertaining and fun to read, so I hope to read more soon! The chapter was nice and long, too, which while some can find tedious, I personally like having more material to look forward to reading. I can't wait for Naruto to start showing some of his hidden strengths to the others...I grin thinking about how they'll react :3
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