| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child (not logged in) On: April 10, 2007 12:51 CDT
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Nice. I like where this story is going and I can understand the time skips, hell I even use them. Minor spelling mistakes but nothing too major. It seemed rushed in places before the time skips and in other minor areas and that does lessen the quality of the story but other than that it is great and I can not wait for the next chapter. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 00:08 CDT
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*severly pissed off american* The hell?! How dare those copycats imitate Nau-kun's gang! Let me at 'em! I'll murderize them! Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 19:12 CDT
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Nice! I believe that relieving your readers of boredom is good... keep up with what you are doing because I'm loving it!! update soon
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Reviewed By: Newmoon_kyuubi (4 got 2 sign in) On: March 12, 2007 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is awsome! I really love the moves because I can't seem to find the translations for words in Japanese. Can you tell me how you got yours? Unless your Japanese, I simply don't know because I'm Korean. Anyway, my mediaminer name is dark_fallen_angel_of_hell so plese tell me, I'm in desperate need. GREAT STORY! KEEP WITH IT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really good! and exciting! i love itachi and naruto... good job!
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Title: nooooo
Reviewed By: tamsonight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god i love it you must write more more and more untile it is complet case this story really really makes me happy ^^ more more orochimaru scares me 0.o
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: February 14, 2007 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondeful chapter and as good as always. I look forward to the next one. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: February 06, 2007 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT! I just started to read this story this morning and I couldn't fucking stop! I love it! I haven't read a story that has caught my attention like that in a LONG time! It's wonderful! I can't wait til you update again. I'm definately waiting with bated breath. I mean you so can't leave it like that! And when is there going to be some lovin'? I almost fucking DIED during that dream sequence when they died. I was having a bit of a spaz attack until Naruto woke up. DAMN. That's about all I can say. Please, please, please, please update soon? I love it so much! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was very good and wasn't that short. I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* MAY YOU BURN! YOU NEVER LEAVE A PERSON ON THAT TYPE OF CLIFFY! *starts crying* Good job Itachi and Kimimaru. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome here ill let my friend here type: XD that was sooo cute you absolutoly have to update a.s.a.p ill die if i don't know what happens and i swear ill cry if i don't know what happens, also if you want Kai to survive my wrath then update a.s.a.p
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4got 2 sign in) On: February 05, 2007 21:53 CST
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i lyked chapter 16 the best. this story is getting really good. i think this is the longest ive ever read a fanfic. but this is well worth it. im gonna agree w/ Death_By_Senbon & JOkEr also, wheres the sexual content?? hopefully it will be some time soon. plz update soon, i cant wait 4 the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:39 CST
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LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!! It is really getting interesting and I really can't wait for your next update!! I have to agree with Death_By_Senbon WHERE IS THE SEXUAL CONTENT???
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Title: ch 16
Reviewed By: UziVeritas On: February 05, 2007 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter (16) made me smirk more than usual... I most certainly am enjoying these more recent chapters-- the first few had become tedious. ^_^ keep at it!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 10:41 CST
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damnit, that was good (and Kinimaro working for Konoha, if he survives this? That would be so COOL!) Plus, the whole Naru/Itachi thing can finally get started. Still, I feel like a gangbanger saying that I want to see Shika and Neji get together too. Neh, whatever. Anyway, loved the latest chapter, look foward to the next with great anticipation. So, Ciao
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