| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Title: Excellent work!!
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: August 02, 2006 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's so frickin' cool. god, i love this story. so naruto not gonna pretend anymore, right? and what about sasuke? is orochimaru still gonna mark him or will naruto scare him off when that scene happens. it was just too cute the way naruto was sweeping temari off her feet. and the fight was awesome. needless, to say i eagerly await you next update.
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Title: =DDDD
Reviewed By: happybunnies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh this is the coolest fanfict that I have read so far. ^^ This story is so awesome!! I love it like crazy >XD. Please continue updating! =)
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Reviewed By: ...hey On: August 01, 2006 15:11 CDT
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Love this fanfic, please write more, if you don't i don't know...Please write more, it's awesome! please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zsfantasy On: August 01, 2006 12:03 CDT
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Wow! Please keep wriitng this wonderful story. I can't express how much I love Naruto in your fic. You are one of the few writers to portray him as an intelligent and strong ninja. I am impress on how well you are writing the interactions between Naruto's secret life and that which occurs in the series. Will you be deviating much from the overall series storyline? You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what happens in the exams in the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!!!
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: August 01, 2006 10:11 CDT
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Like it. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: July 31, 2006 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You missed a lot of obvious grammar mistakes this time. I loved the battle though!! Itachii makes me SQUEEEE!!! Other than the grammar I liked it. PS: If you need help with grammar I'm willing to help, I love this story. (mist_stalker5 at hotmail dot com)
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Reviewed By: nekoyoukie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a verey good story but a bit long winded. You bilt up the supence so much that I msut know how it ends. And I can't wait for Itachi to make an apierentce. So please right more soon I can't wate. Bye
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 20, 2006 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is some the most intense stuff ive read in a long time and i have to admit that it is totally sweet. please keep on writing this i am soo addicted to this you dont even know i mean i read this thing atleast 4 or 5 times in a row, but on to the point. you leave great cliff-hangers and it just wants to make u read more untill there is no more to read which is god and bad cuz i stayed up till about 5:30 in the morning reading this. to my personal point of veiw i think that naruto should capture the guy who is watching the battle but you may have a different way and i am just stating that seeing that so far there is nothing more to go on my mind just cant stop wondering what is going to happen next. which kinda sucks cuz i keep on trying to write my own fan-fic and cant get any new ideas on how i am going to complete the first chapter. back to the point like i said our writing style is awsome and i cant bring up any fault so far and that is after reading the whole thing in one go. please please please please..etc. write more, and quickly for i shall soon go nsane waiting for the end results and then have to hunt you down and make you write this as fast as humanly possable i will use a whip if i have to. soooo in other (muchless hash words) write more or there shall be pain and suffering to follow.ok ooookkk then im glad we understand each other. cya. Crazy_Killa out
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: July 07, 2006 21:27 CDT
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Continue! I love this version of Naruto a lot. And thats saying something when you read different versions of Naruto. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kage_Fan On: July 07, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated this so high because, first off, the story is upbeat, and showcases naruto is a better light, as well as being so damm cool!!!!!!!!!! keep writing, i await the next chapter egerly, and will say any who flame will burn in deaths butt.
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Reviewed By: CK On: July 07, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I've been reading this over and over waiting for new chapters! I hope Naruto will win the fight! I can't wait! Hurry and write more okay?! ^.^
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Reviewed By: narcanotsignedin On: July 07, 2006 12:24 CDT
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Great chapter. Poor Shikamaru ;) I like how you had the humour of Lee and the seriousness of Naruto's character all at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 02:34 CDT
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This is such an awesome story. In the last chapter, Lee was hilarious. I can't wait to read to next chapter!! This is a very interesting story and the thing that happened right before Naruto met Haku is very exciting.
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: June 22, 2006 18:51 CDT
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UPDATE soon plz... so whats shino going to do with the insects
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Reviewed By: KrillLunch On: June 03, 2006 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! You've done a great job rewriting the Naruto plot and it is better than ever! This is one my my favorite Naruto stories. I especially like the "inner" Naruto- confident, strong and funny! It's always a little hard to read stories in which Naruto is made out to be a blathering idiot who cares only for ramen. There's a lot more to his character than that and you bring out his strength in an interesting way. The Kyuubi/Naruto interactions are always fun to read. I like that they are close- Kyuubi is Naruto's mentor and friend. When they are debating Naruto's mask! Great conversations there. Which leads me to my favorite part of the story. Naruto's mask. Or rather, the times when he lets it down. Everytime you write about people's reactions to Naruto when his mask is down, I squeal to myself. I want Naruto to be as acknowlegded and idolized as he does! I love how Naruto is so much stronger than everyone else- and how he lets it show, a little at a time. I have to laugh at Sasuke. For once, he's not the all around best-at-everything guy (which gets tedious). I can't wait until they figure out how strong he is! (Even though I say that, please don't let the secret out yet! I love the reactions too much , I think!) Also, it says this is an Itachi/Naruto, which I am a huge fan of. I am excited for the two to meet. Will it be during Naruto's stint as the Shadow Warrior guy? Exciting, exciting! Please please keep writing, because I will continue reading. This story is wonderful!
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