| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 08:24 CST
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More and more interesting or should I say and the plot thickens! good job
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Title: This is Arielle.
Reviewed By: Death_By_Senbon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. But GAHH!! The spelling errors!!! Some one save me from obsessive-compulsive betaing!!!! PLEASE!! I really REALLY like. But where exactly is the sexual content? OH and Jacob is out. Now I'm just waiting for A.J. and they will be able to read the awesomeness of this chpater as well. Hurry up with the next one. Please? Laters.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look you got over 100 reviews aren't you happy well great story keep up the good work your totally awesome i do hope you will update soon i shall be waiting most patiently.
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I hope you update really soon!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 00:28 CST
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Glad for the new chapter, and looking foward to the next. Love this story, as always, and hope to see more of it in the near future. So please, may the muse greatly endow you, so the next chapter comes quickly. Later.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 21:03 CST
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Yay! An update!!!!!! LOVED THE CHAPTER... please make Naruto and Neji heal fast please. I really want to know if they are going to stay in Konoha or leave again either way I'll be waiting for your next update.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 20:46 CST
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Shocking for them they should hurry and heal Naruto! Very good chapter keep up the good work looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so good! i forgot what this fanfic was called and had been trying to remember 'cuase i really wanted to read more! Now i've finllay come across it and i'm very happy! It's so good! really very very good!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay please keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:16 CST
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you finally updated i love you update soon like in tomorrow!!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 19:24 CST
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yay!! u updated. i wish it was longer. but oh well. we cant always have wat we wish rite? update soon.
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahaha. How long did it take you to coem up with those? They SO work. Your really good at fight scenes. But why does Itachi show himself to Naruto when he's trying to capture him? And where's Kisame? I like the update. Hey. TALK TO ME EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE!! I'm almost always on. Start talking. And Happy New Year.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:45 CST
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pretty cool fights keep up the good work and update again soon!
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Reviewed By: DDA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so Cool!!!! I loved it!!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: Kai28 (not logged in) On: January 03, 2007 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work your stories are so awesome i hope you update soon i'll try to wait patiently haha.
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