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Title: Wheres the next instalment?
Reviewed By: Arachne'sWeb On: March 11, 2009 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write SO much like I do.... Complete with the spelling errors!!! I was searching for Naruto stories on google a few nights ago, and I found this, and I swear I haven't been able to read anything else..... Including my homework... *sweatbead*. This is a fantastic story, but I must inquire, WHERE IS THE NEXT INSTALMENT?? I nearly had a stroke when I reached the end and I couldn't read anything else! you're an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read the next chapter (if there is one)
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Title: My Wonderful & Confusing Review
Reviewed By: LadyShikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you can say you got all 10s from me. This ike the bes fanfic I ever read and I dont know if its yours or someone compied you, but I have even read this on FanFiction.Net. Also its a great story if I can read 4 times in the past year and not get tired of it. And since I've givin you a lot of praise for this story I hope it will help you to update soon because I'm dieing for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: reicheru_x [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say really is. Oh my. This has to be one of the best Naruto fanfictions I have read. EVER. You are an amazingly talented writer I found this story so captivating that when I went around my friends whilst reading this I took over her computer to continue. And even she agreed that it was amazing. I read many fanfictions and I enjoy loads but this was just fantastic. Please please continue to write this as I would love to read more. The characters are so complex and everything is well thought out and described. I believe it would be a waste to not continue with the story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 16:22 CDT
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Though, i kinda wonder what Kyou's plan was... and what were the items Naruto requested of him were.... um.. did you forget him? :D also, whatever happened to the 'wrist bands'? you said the snakes bit his wrists, causing him to drop his swords. but if he had the watch/senbon shooter(which btw youve never actually used, neither his poisons) then how could the snakes have hurt him? okay, enough critiquing. ja ne! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! Kimimaro is going too! hes too much of a pretty boy to dieeee ; ; im so glad you had Tsunade save him randomly!!! 8cries in happiness*
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story has been one of my favorites for a long long time. I have read no other fanfiction that can equal your brillance and calliper. Please update and please do it soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 16:31 CDT
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Many months between updates, but it set up events pretty damn well. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 15:02 CDT
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omg, WHY?????????? WHY CRUEL WORLD????????????????????????????????????? How could you make me wait months on end, and only write a freakin page???!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAH!!!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:37 CDT
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I am Glad u updated!! I cannot wait for the next chapter and see if Itachi is going to make an apperance soon.. **^^
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Reviewed By: Baka Hanyou Rahvin On: June 30, 2008 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really good chap! I 'm so happy you updated! I've been waiting for forever for this story to have an update. Please update soon!
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Title: COME!!!ON!!!
Reviewed By: cosmos1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you stop?!?!?!?!?WHY??? WHY??? YOU. MUST. FINISH. PLLLEEEAAASEEE?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, you have to continue this i so want to find out happens. please update this as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is brilliant please please please continue. You are one of my favorite authors of all time.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore ... okay now that you know what I want, I would like to know how close you are to completeing chapter 22. Also wondering about you health because I just read all 22 chapters strait through(with minor bathroom breaks) and I NEED the next chappie, thanks! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 02:11 CST
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OMFJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yaoi!!!!!!!!!!!!FINALLY!!!!!!!!poor, poor Naru-chan...His ears might never be the same again! I, however, agree with Kyuubi!!!!(heh-heh, I like his pervyness!) PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update again soon!
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