| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Title: Hi there
Reviewed By: Redrockcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there this is the first time i reviewed some thing lol the thing is that i LOVE your story and like other storys the people writing them stop half way into the story when i started reading your story it was always in the back of my mind bugging me i set there borod and nothing to do and i find my self wondering in the story has had a chapter added or if it has been stoped in the middle of class at school i get so borod i think about what you wrote and then i can't pay attenion in class because i'm thinking about the story and this has got to be the most i have ever typed well just so you know again i love you story and i hope you keep writing. sorry if a repeated thing over and over. good luck on your story and anyothers you are working on J.A.W.
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Reviewed By: drakness falls On: October 17, 2006 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this continue u got me hooked
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Title: me and more me
Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:18 CDT
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o exoltied one i thank you o mighty pen from above.any way thanks f4 the chapter me lub it keep on writin'. and so o mighty pen i bid u adoo.
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i have finished the chapter and i am sad to say but this chapter is not that good i think you are going way to fast covering what is in the original story line and not so much your own story line like in the beining of the story it is not that good any more hope to read something better next time still loving fan sesssy_lover by the way to all thoughs people with all this spare time and reading other peoples reviews (i do that some time you can find out if it is a good fanfic or not ;p)i am not contridicting myself in my first review it was time for me to go to school but i wanted to say i was happy about a new chapter in inner secrets so now i read it and here is my review ;p
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 06:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg its a new chapter thats all i can say going to read it now does happy dance i love u !!!!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keeeewwwwwllll you mustMUST keep it up please!!!!
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Title: Warning: überlong review P;
Reviewed By: EM! On: October 10, 2006 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I started reading this fic, it irked me in the first couple of chapters. It seemed to me to go to fast and to be too similar to those fics that completely remake the main character into the author's own twisted version, but seeing as some (almost none) of these fics tend to get better as they go along, I kept on reading. And kept on reading, and kept on reading. It took me six or so hours to read from the first to the twelfth chapters, and I have to say, I fucking LOVE you. You have made me once again realise why anime/manga fanfiction deserves to be read, and why it is so rewarding finding the pure genius amongst the piles upon piles of shit. Especially in series that are horribly, horribly overplayed, quoted, and beaten to death, like Naruto. Right now, it's really early in the morning for me, but you can bet that, as soon as I have proper computer access, I shall be sitting here and refreshing every five minutes to see if there's a new chapter. I shall probably sign up for mediaminer again, because of your wonderful writing (not that it's not lacking in minor spelling errors, but c'est la vie ;B). Cheers. :]]
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 10:58 CDT
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please write another chapter im drooling over my computer waiting for what will happen next cant wait hope to read more of your beautiful work( i have heard flattery may work )(lol)
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Title: Chpt 11
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit that I read chapter 10 and 11 before reviewing, and that's why these two reviews are so close together. It was just that I couldn't pause to write cause I wanted to keep reading. I love this story and the battles were good and interesting. Naruto is so cool! o.o not to mention Shika and Neji, they're both so awesome as well. Of course, my favorite character is Gaara and it's great to see so much of him in this chapter... even if he is being very bloody, lol. -huggles her Gaara plushie- I still love ya, Gar-kun! hehe, anywho, cheers again on this chapter that was long, good and left me wanting more! Hope ya update soon and good luck. -hands her 'off' for that pesky writer's block- there ya go ^.^ Cheers! and later.
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Title: For Chapter 10
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did notice a few gramatical errors that should be corrected, but other than that it was a very entertaining chapter! I loved it. I do so enjoy this story a lot and have to give you cheers since I love Naruto being friends with Neji and Shikamaru, so awesome. And I about died laughing to this line in the chapter: "Neji chuckled as he tried to picture the Kage-Gesshoku fleeing from a ghost while screaming like a little girl." Naruto is so silly, even when he's stronger than in the anime, lol. I love him and think that him and Itachi together is a good match, although there has been nothing to suggest that there will be a relationship. Either way, I hope to keep reading this story since it is very good! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover On: September 25, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a new chapter happy happy happy !!!!!!i am a little confused what is happening with the characters but all and all i love it !!!hope you keep on writing i will be back reading more of your beautiful fanfic!! and yes that was a very very lllooonnnggg chapter!!! so waits a sad little person waiting for you to make happy again with another chapter!!!;p ;p ;p
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Reviewed By: me and more me On: September 25, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more luv it but your timing of chapters are bad also remember how old the characters are
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Reviewed By: nekoyoukie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That was amazing!!! All I can say is please right more soon even though you have school. I know how big a pian school can be.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 18:40 CDT
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Yay!!! This Chapter was so cool!!!!~!!!!! I really hope you update Soon I really want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ^^ new chapter! and its good O_o =) hehe, bad cliffy tho XP can't wait for the next chapter ^^ update soon please!
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