| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 23:25 CST
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This Chapter was the GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!Best way to start off the New Year. I l ove how Naruto, Neji, and Shikamaru are now like super heroes and all. I love their names and everything. This Chapter was the GREATEST!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 18:53 CST
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HA! First reveiwer of 2007! w00t! Anyway, althought the chapter was short, but it awsome! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: chibiconan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is beautifully written. It is absolutely wonderful and I look forward to another chapter {soon hopefully}. Stina
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 20:58 CST
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I really love your plot and want to know what is going to happen so please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: SunaTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 15:56 CST
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I really enjoy your style of writing, and I love how you made Naruto-kun emo!!!(woot-woot!)(sry) And I think that you should definitly continue writing!=^.^=
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. Though I wonder if you would accept my services as a beta reader. I really enjoy this fic and the story line you have created. It is one of the most original yet acurate fic I have ever encountered and I would LOVE the chance to be a part of the execution of this fic. A quick question though, I somehow just DON'T see Itachi as an uke in ANY relationship, especially a relationship with Naruto. Though I suppose they could take turns as to who is top. And I was wondering, do you have Yahoo instant messenger? If you do please look for death_by_senbon or yaoi_fan1989 both at yahoo. I would love to talk to you, computer to computer, to tell you my true thoughts on this fic. I truly do enjoy it but would like to discuss with you the inconsistencies I find. In the story line and the usege of proper Japanese phraseing and grammer. Please reply even if it's just to tell me to go screw myself with a fire poker. And if you do decide you want to check my credentials send a message to Vampiress-Kagome or Asterixa on fanfiction and ask them about Arie Date and her ideas and/or beta credentials. They will tell you what you wish to know. Please update and contact me if you have any questions. Ja Ne! Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: The Devils Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Op-date please please please please please please please please!! please!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope you get over your writers block soon hope to see you soon as well keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope you get over your writers block soon hope to see you soon as well keep up the good work.
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Title: OH MY FUCKING GOD!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE FUCKING BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THE NET I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!!!!!!! And saying that is alot since this is my 845 story in 3 years!!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO UPDATE I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF NAURTO AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR HIM TO KICK OCHIMARU'S SNAKE ASS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Okie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it so far. but where is the naruto/itachi??? coming up soon i hope. oh well... keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story plz dont quit upd soon
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work ill wait for your next update may your writers block pass.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:54 CST
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u should totally continue this story. & can u hurry up w/ the pariings already. lol. jk. take ur time. i mean if u have riters block then u cant really think of anything. but plz try & update this soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 04:42 CST
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Hey, its short, but still kickass. And please, some new moves that naruto actually uses would but too cool! It is a lot of work to write your own stories, but the reviews, at least I hope, cna make it all worth it.
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