| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: Newmoon_kyuubi (4 got 2 sign in) On: March 12, 2007 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is awsome! I really love the moves because I can't seem to find the translations for words in Japanese. Can you tell me how you got yours? Unless your Japanese, I simply don't know because I'm Korean. Anyway, my mediaminer name is dark_fallen_angel_of_hell so plese tell me, I'm in desperate need. GREAT STORY! KEEP WITH IT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really good! and exciting! i love itachi and naruto... good job!
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Title: nooooo
Reviewed By: tamsonight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god i love it you must write more more and more untile it is complet case this story really really makes me happy ^^ more more orochimaru scares me 0.o
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: February 14, 2007 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondeful chapter and as good as always. I look forward to the next one. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: February 06, 2007 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT! I just started to read this story this morning and I couldn't fucking stop! I love it! I haven't read a story that has caught my attention like that in a LONG time! It's wonderful! I can't wait til you update again. I'm definately waiting with bated breath. I mean you so can't leave it like that! And when is there going to be some lovin'? I almost fucking DIED during that dream sequence when they died. I was having a bit of a spaz attack until Naruto woke up. DAMN. That's about all I can say. Please, please, please, please update soon? I love it so much! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was very good and wasn't that short. I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* MAY YOU BURN! YOU NEVER LEAVE A PERSON ON THAT TYPE OF CLIFFY! *starts crying* Good job Itachi and Kimimaru. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome here ill let my friend here type: XD that was sooo cute you absolutoly have to update a.s.a.p ill die if i don't know what happens and i swear ill cry if i don't know what happens, also if you want Kai to survive my wrath then update a.s.a.p
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4got 2 sign in) On: February 05, 2007 21:53 CST
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i lyked chapter 16 the best. this story is getting really good. i think this is the longest ive ever read a fanfic. but this is well worth it. im gonna agree w/ Death_By_Senbon & JOkEr also, wheres the sexual content?? hopefully it will be some time soon. plz update soon, i cant wait 4 the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:39 CST
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LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!! It is really getting interesting and I really can't wait for your next update!! I have to agree with Death_By_Senbon WHERE IS THE SEXUAL CONTENT???
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Title: ch 16
Reviewed By: UziVeritas On: February 05, 2007 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter (16) made me smirk more than usual... I most certainly am enjoying these more recent chapters-- the first few had become tedious. ^_^ keep at it!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 10:41 CST
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damnit, that was good (and Kinimaro working for Konoha, if he survives this? That would be so COOL!) Plus, the whole Naru/Itachi thing can finally get started. Still, I feel like a gangbanger saying that I want to see Shika and Neji get together too. Neh, whatever. Anyway, loved the latest chapter, look foward to the next with great anticipation. So, Ciao
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 08:24 CST
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More and more interesting or should I say and the plot thickens! good job
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Title: This is Arielle.
Reviewed By: Death_By_Senbon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. But GAHH!! The spelling errors!!! Some one save me from obsessive-compulsive betaing!!!! PLEASE!! I really REALLY like. But where exactly is the sexual content? OH and Jacob is out. Now I'm just waiting for A.J. and they will be able to read the awesomeness of this chpater as well. Hurry up with the next one. Please? Laters.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look you got over 100 reviews aren't you happy well great story keep up the good work your totally awesome i do hope you will update soon i shall be waiting most patiently.
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