| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 23:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo...Update! I just love updates, and I was ecstatic when I seen this was. :D Great chapter BTW. Sess can be such an ass sometimes, I swear. And it appears he's being a big one here. He really should listen to the old youkai, but knowing him, he wont. Could prove to be very disastrous to him in the long run. I think he's also underestimating InuYasha. Heh, bigger mistake. I also love the interaction within Inus pack. I was also wondering how long it was gonna be before Sango got disciplined and what Inu was gonna do. Inu seems to becoming a true pack leader here, looking after his humans. I love how you have everything. Again, great chap, and update when ya can. :P
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Title: Chapters 1-13
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New reader of your story here and I have to say that I am impressed! ^^ I haven't yet read an Inuyasha fanfic where the trip through the well was one-way from the start. I also haven't read one where there was no Shikon no Tama or Shikon no Kakera always floating around somewhere. It's still in the story but it's not everpresent. I thoroughly enjoy your creativity and writing style. You manage to keep me interested with a desire to read more. The plto is wonderful! The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is strong and full of passion, just the way I like it. ;) With Inuyasha essentially being more demon than human most of the time I love how he acts and reacts with his Inuyoukai instincts. However short their conversation was on mating you still made it meaningful. ^^ I was very surprised when Sesshoumaru slaughtered Kouga and his wolf pack but it fits his character perfectly. I commend you on the interaction between Inu, Kags, and the rest of their pack. For some reason I love how well Inu and Kags interact with one another while Sango and Miroku cause tension. ^^ It makes the story so much more interesting, not to mention getting to see more of Inu's possessive nature! Btw, don't worry about adding Shippou because as it stands right now your story rocks without him, hehe. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: November 25, 2006 01:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best stories i've read in a while. i like how u have the story coming from a more realistic point of view and not so much luck, like the other stories. it makes it more believable and favorable among readers. I can't even begin to describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading these chapters. I wish I had some criticism. maybe then my review would be more than just a number on this site. plz review soon i really like this story, im putting it at the top of my list next to 'For All The Things I Didn't Do' story. Check it out some time, get some ideas for future stores and whatnot.^_^ thx 4 listening
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 07:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I really like this story a lot. I do hope you update, please do. And keep up the good work. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 16:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, so you're on MM.org 2^^ You kno i luv this fic as hell, and now i'll kno when you update since you're now a fav author!! Now can you PWEASE read my fic!! It might never b as good as yours but it would b nice to get an opinion from some1 as awesome as you =) *Gets on bended knees* :p ONEGAI!!! READ MY FIC!!!! ^__^ oh, n update soon
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 17, 2006 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I just KNOW there is going to be a lemon in the next chapter, YAY!!!! Cuz Kag is covered in that damn blood and shit and Inu is going to go nuts. Damn it though, I was really wanting Inu to come along and tear Kouga to shreds it would have been wonderful and beautiful. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: ch. 13
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 02:54 PST
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This was an excellent chapter. I was truely shocked when Kouga died. I had expected some sort of alliance that reflected what happened in canon. Killing him was a good move. Not only did it illustrate how different this Sesshoumaru is, but it really puts us on notice that you are really allowing this story to flow from the divergent point you created instead of bringing it around to the same thing with some different details. Anything can happen and I can't wait to see what's next.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 11:55 PST
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awwwwww so sad...but i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 09:07 PST
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Inuyasha to the rescue! Sadness, heart wrenching... poor Kags. I hope she gets better after this... how hard for her...
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 06:15 PST
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Inuyasha! He found her! I can't wait for the next chater! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: I.G. On: November 15, 2006 23:49 PST
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Dayuuuuuuuuum!!! Sesshomaru is the fucking man. Since I know you hate Kouga, I knew he was going to die, but I didn't see that coming. Fuckin' A! Great chap and lurvely Sessie-poo!
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Title: Woo-hoo, update!!
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 23:47 PST
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Yeesh, everyone wants a piece of Kagome. I'm kinda glad Kouga got his head lopped off after the whole attmepted rape thing. Really great chapter by the way. I'm interested to see what's gonna happen with that Makoto guy. As always I'm in awe of your story telling abilities. Hope to read more soon.
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 18:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was fantastic...the action and drama captured my attaintion and wouldn't let go until the last word was read. I can't wait for more. I really liked this story when it started but know I'm in love and I can't get enough.
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: November 15, 2006 18:34 PST
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Wow. Of all the kidnapping events involving Kouga I have ever seen at mediaminer.org, this one is by far the most... traumatizing. I was so happy to see you update I squealled. :P I can't wait to see the next chapter to come.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 17:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Good chapter. I'm glad that Kagome is okay and managed to keep Kouga's sorry butt from raping her. I'm also glad that she is back with Inuyasha (at least for now). But Sesshomaru....let's just say we certainly can't call him "Fluffy" in this story, lol. He is one cold s.o.b. Inuyasha is going to have his work cut out for him with Sesshomaru for sure. I look forward to the update.
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