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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Kid's Amulet On: June 20, 2006 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good. You've captured Inuyahsa's over-protectivness for Kagome really well even if it's for property rights (till now:P) against Kisho and I love the way you are developing the relationship between them. I also really love the way you're sticking to the original plot of Takahashi but with your own original twist. What I find werid though is that you have totally excluded Myouga from this part of the story. I mean, he was supposed to arrive just before Sesshoumaru arrives in town (originally to find out where Inuyasha's sword is hidden but here he just wants to kick some brother's butt) to 'help' out Inuyasha whislt he wields Tesusaiga in his father's grave & to mention his blood inheritance by talking about his mother to Kaede & Kagome (+ Sango), for Kag to realise that his mother was the human parent & his father the demon one. For Kag to learn more about Inu's heritance in other words. So, would Myouga arrive after Sesshoumaru's appearence or would he come along with Shippo somehow? (I can't wait for Shippo to come also:he's a must!XD) Don't forget that Myouga helps Inu out on his first human appearence by drinking most of the poison ingected by the spider demon for the jewel shard (though this would chance a bit here right?) so I guess Myouga does hold a sort of important role in both source of information & advice of steps. On the whole, the rest is O.K!:) I look forward to reading more of this story. I will be waiting...KU KU KU!!!XD
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Kid's Amulet On: June 20, 2006 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good. you've captured Inuyahsa's over-protectivness for Kagome even if it's for property rights (Till now:P) against Kisho and I love the way you are developing the relationship between them. & I really love the way you're sticking to the original plot of Takahashi but with your own original twist. What I find werid though is that you have totally excluded Myouga from this part of the story. I mean, he was supposed to arrive just before Sesshoumaru arrives in town (originally to find out where Inuyasha's sword is hidden but here he just wants to kick some brother's butt) to 'help' out Inuyasha whislt he wields Tesusaiga in his father's grave & to mention his blood inheritance by talking about his mother to Kaede & Kagome (+ Sango), for Kag to realise that his mother was the human parent & his father the demon one. For Kag to learn more about Inu's heritance in other words. So, would Myouga arrive after Sesshoumaru's appearence or would he come along with Shippo somehow? (I can't wait for Shippo to come also:he's a must!XD) Don't forget that Myouga helps Inu out on his first human appearence by drinking most of the poison ingected by the spider demon for the jewwl shard (though this would chance a bit here right?) so I guess Myouga does hold a sort of important role in both source of information & advice of steps. On the whole, the rest is O.K!:) I look forward to reading more of this story. I will be waiting...KU KU KU!!!XD
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Title: You're G.R.E.A.T!!! X3
Reviewed By: Kairi's twin On: June 20, 2006 13:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awersome Inu fanfic, probibly the best of all!!Keep up the good work Bluezinthos!! XDD
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Title: No Shikon, no Kikyou!
Reviewed By: Rid-chan On: June 16, 2006 10:09 PDT
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It's interesting the way you have written your story just like the original but at the same time it is different with your own twist of changes, like the fact that Kikyou isn't that important in the story like in the original Inuyasha & is just part of history like the Shikon no Tama. It actually makes lots of sense. In the original story of Inuyasha, Kikyou came back to the living world because the Shikon had also returned in the story, like how Rumiko explained in one of her interviews. & like she said, hadn't there been the shikon in play, probably even Kikyou wouldn't have returned to the show either. I look really foward to countinue reading this story, it is absolutly wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 16, 2006 09:58 PDT
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Nice, want to read more pleese
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Reviewed By: master billy On: June 15, 2006 23:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
my my this is an interesting read i have read the whole thing in several hours and wen you start some thing at 11 in the night it must be good to keep you read at 3 in the morning after all people do have the unfortunate issue of getting tired after a while still this is beside the point i have so far enjoyed the story and i have found my self cuios as to what will happen next so please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ronnika On: June 14, 2006 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awesome story!!! I'm speachless its that good. I wonder if you are going to add anyother characters to you story. And yes!! no dead claypot to distroy the bond between Kagome and InuYasha. I'm at the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Subtle Serenity On: June 13, 2006 12:58 PDT
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I have been greatly impressed by your work and I really hope you can continue. If you ever need inspiration, then you should check out a site called fictionpress. Whenever I get writers block, I head over there and read some originals. Those people really do have some fresh ideas!(check out my fic there) Anyway, just make sure to update!( I hope I helped u out a little...(*>_
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Reviewed By: Darking On: June 12, 2006 06:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh yah!! You finally updated, this story is amazing as are your other stories. Keep up the great work and PLEASE keep those updates coming! :)
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 01:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've weaved somekind of spell here...I tried to walk away many times, but I couldn't. It was like the story was in my head and wouldn't leave unilt I'd finish every last chapter and now It's on my fav's list even though everytime Inuyasha does the domanate dog thing and Kagome does the sumbisive thing I feel like poking my eye's out. OOOh and by the way the lemons are really really um... well you fill in the blank
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Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really really enjoying this story. i like the au in the feudal era. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: entropy9 (not signed in) On: June 11, 2006 17:22 PDT
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YAY! This was good, I'm glad the story is moving away from the village arc...I didn't like those interfering people...and Sango was really annoying in this chapter...anyway, keep up the good work, so glad you updated!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely adorable. I love Inuyasha's ears and how protective he is of Kagome. How evil of Sango to keep persecuting poor Inuyasha! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: June 11, 2006 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, it's soooo good!!! And I love the way you are developing the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha. And I also enjoy the way you have Sango and Inuyasha constantly at each other's throats. I love Sango but I think she's better as a character when she's hating Inu and they are fighting against each other. *shrug* I think I mainly like it becomes it leaves windows and openings for Kagome to yell and scream about how Inu isn't a monster and stuff like that. Now this upcoming fight with Sess is going to be interesting, will Inu get to rip off his arm? It seems like you're kinda sticking to the original story line but with your own twist. Anyway it's a very good story and I hope you update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: little-tally On: June 11, 2006 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I have been waiting for a new chapter since the last one you wrote. Your really need to write more often cause I was waiting for that new chapter. For along time I kept on coming back to see an update for new chapter. Keep writing and soon cause I just can't wait and see what happens to Inuyasha when he faces his brother. Please write a new chapter soon cause I will be waiting. LOL!!
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