| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 20:02 CDT
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i really liked this chap. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, and I can't believe I ignored it for as long as I have. I have to say I really impressed with the use of relems and magic. And the charaterization isn't bad either. I hope you get a chance to update soon, because I am really enjoying it so far. So good luck and good writing!
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Title: Desert Rose
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really getting into this story.This chapter is great. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story! please update soon
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 15:44 CDT
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i really like this chap. good job. please update soon.
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Title: happy! happy! joy! joy!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good, let me correct that, GREAT work.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 21:53 CDT
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i really really really really really real- oh you get the idea...like this story. please please please update soon.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter it is really good. Keep up the great work. please update soon
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON such an interesting story! i love AU lol why do you spell bastard, bustard? its like an odd mix of bastard and buster... please fix that sounds childish.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: kittyevil78 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgosh i love this fanfic!! its one of my favorites now ^___________________^ lol anyways keep up the good work and update as soon as possible or i'll die of suspense!!!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is great I love this chapter also.please update soon
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Title: THIS IS SO COOL!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so amazing, Your idea is just absolutly genius! You make einstein look retarted! I really like inuyasha's desciption is simply yummy *drools all over keyboard* Please Please write more, this story is ver very addictive, by the way what color is kagome's eyes in your fic, in some they are blue, and other they are chocolate brown, forgive me if you already told, I can be stupis at times ah please fogive me for my stupidity and bluntness master! Anyways update soon!!!!
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Title: Niiice
Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the idea! It was a little vague, though, and it was hard to picture some of Kagome and Inu-Yasha's movements. Other times I could totally see what Kagome was doing (Ooooh! This sucks, I'm going to DIE IN THE DESERT! ;_;). Lol. I'm not sure if you've said it, but is it supposed to be like Arabian deserts or a more Fantasy-oriented kind of place? Well super-duper job, and I'm excited to read more! Over and Out, ~Broken Dreams
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 18:32 CDT
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You should write a litle more, it's pretty interesting (and great clothes for Inuyasha BTW! ANGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL!) *fangirl squeal*.
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