| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 13:48 CDT
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this chapter was awsome i do hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are lying! you want reviews and you would withold updates without them! so i say good job nice chap worth the wait! but UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 03:20 CDT
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stop revising and put a new chapter up! its like a tease...
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Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didn't think that i would like this story but you've proved me wrong. excellent writing!
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Title: *sqee!*
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far my favorite sory of all time, OMG! OMG!I loved chapter eight! Well, can you please give kagome her miko powers... or something, mind reading,super speed...ANYTHING!!! I don't like it when people make Kagome the kind of thing that's like a deer in front of a eighteen wheeler truck... or a butterfly... anyways your ideas are great, keep up the good work!UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I've passed this fic over, not sure exactly what the plot was about, since I first saw it on here. In a way, I'm glad I did, because that gave me 7 chapters of a very enjoyable story to read tonight. Another part of me wishes I had waited longer. But then, I'm sure I would be just as dissatisfied with the lack of another chapter anyway. Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is very sweet. You've managed to keep Kagome innocent and modest. Inuyasha's advances are met with understandable concern. Good work! Too many writers make the relationship move too quickly and turn Kagome into an expert on intimacy when she's never even been kissed before. The only recomendation I have for you is to be careful with your spelling and grammar. You sometimes have words in sentences that don't belong there, or repeat words beside eachother. The spelling isn't so bad, a lot of words I can figure out what you meant to write, but you've put a word that does not mean what you meant it to, or you've used the wrong spelling. I recomend dictionary.com and the thesaurus (look at other words that mean close to the same thing to see if you have the proper spelling for the definition you mean). I look forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the hard work!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please more
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 03:00 CDT
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I love Inuyasha's way of apologizing for taking Kagome's first kiss! I'm curious about something. Is Kagome going to have any miko powers in this story?
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Title: love it!!!
Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 18:35 CDT
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I love this fic...it's so creative and original. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 21:08 CDT
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great story!!! kind of reminds me of my favorite manga "Red River". hope you update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooooooove this story update soon ok?!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 17:54 CDT
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The action between Inu and Kags was hot. You should make them go all the way in the next chapter, and have them get in a fight right after wards. That would be so kickass, and I would love you for the rest of forever if you did do something like that. I enjoyed this chapter, and I cant wait for the next one! Keep up the good work! ^__^
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 16:11 CDT
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Yay another chapter. im loveing this story and i want to read more!!! yay. i hope inuyasha and kagome make it through this. and i want the war to be over soon. but not to soon. i dont like fics that are only 10 or 11 chapters. i can finish that off in a day. Keep updateing and ill Be happy :)oh this might show up twice. i dont know why but my comp likes to submit things twice on here.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i can't believe i haven't left you a review yet! i'm really loving this story. i love how you are blending the elements of magic and sorcery with the powers of the demons and tessaiga. everthing is seemless. inuyasha is much more forward in his feelings but still sweet and careful with the confused kagome. the battles are well set up and the action flows smoothly. great transitions. i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 10:14 CDT
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this is a sweet chap. great job. please update soon.
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