| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 03:49 CDT
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that was beautiful! please update again soon. this story is amazing.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 00:48 CDT
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If you're corny so am I because I teared up too. Finally he got the courage to see his daughter(with help) but nonetheless they're together. I really appreciate the strength you've given Kagome, she and Jordan are really keeping things together. What is Naraku up to now? When his time comes, I hope it's slow and painful. Well excellent writing again and hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you have been a busy bee!! Lol, thanks for the dedication, it was so very sweet! I see things are slowly coming around, however I am still worried. That curse is following them, Inu is hurt, and Kagome still doesnt know where she belongs. Its so sad. My heart breaks for her. Inuyasha has lost a lot, he lost a wife and a child. But he still has his place, his brother, and a daughter, not to mention friends who love him. Kagome is in another world where she has lost everything, all family. Yes, she has gotten friends, but the one person who is closest to her heart has pretty much abandoned her and left her to pick up the pieces. Hmmm, do you think you could have a coconut fall on his head to knock some sense back into his brain? Lol....anywayz, thanks for the update and thank you for the dedication again. It was very sweet. Now go get some rest!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How sweet!! Keep up the amazing work and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm so glad that Silva is adjusting well; I REALLLY liked the part where she met Sesshoumaru (her reaction to his face was too cute!). But, now if we could just get her gorgeous, troubled dad straightened out. After all the HELL that man has gone through, it seems so unfair that Inuyasha's going to die anyway.....ironically to save the daughter he thought was already dead. Not to mention that Kagome will lose the man she loves...and Silva her father all over again. Uh! I REALLY hope that there is a way out of this minefield! I definitely won't be able to keep myself from reading to find out. Great story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha finally went to see silva thanks to kagome... will kagome be able to go back and see her family... wonder what happens next... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow its 6:14 am and I have call at 8 or mayeb 7 I dont remember..Iwas so determined to finih it today..but its incomplete!!! =C MAn Im so tired. PLease update soon. Im gonna sleep..... I feel likthis @o@ and probably look that way to. Great work! Night.. morning!?
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Title: OMg
Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love your story but im leaving y big review for the end. I have found THE perfect song for inuyasha up to this point. You should really listent o it. Its House of Cards by Madina LAke. It was just so funnyit cam on right when I was reading this chapter and U thought it fit so well wit him. =D
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 00:59 CDT
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I am glad that Silva is doing much better, she's gone through hell and back. Inuyasha leaving Silva in Kagome's care shows that he's trusting her more but he needs to come clean about being poisoned. Please allow Inu to visit he has to see his daughter besides him and Kagome should have some alone time. Great chapter, read ya soon
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I am a little late. I became a huge fan while reading Nightwalker, and I have to say what a little treasure finding this story was. Ok, you can kick me accross the room if you want after I ask this question....is this supposed to be like a romance/angst type story? I was just wondering, cause my heart broke with the last few chapters. I know that Inuyasha is going through hell, has been through hell, he is trying desperately to save the lands, and he just got his daughter back. Man, that was insane by the way. Very well written. But I cant help but feel that he has been litterally pushing Kags away like she was more of a burden then his friend. He snaps at her, when she tried to tell him about his daughter he acted like he wanted nothing to do with her and she was the last one he wanted to talk to. I am racking my brain why. Could it be that he wants it to be that way to stay safe?? Could he push her away, and then seriously regret it?? Does he even appreciate all she has done for them, for him?? Ok, can you see that your story has engulfed my immagination?? Im loosing sleep over this one, lol. Ok, I have to stop now, cus my hair is gonna fall out. You take care, and thanks so much for this story. It is so much fun, really good!
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Reviewed By: Bree4eva On: September 26, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so great!!!!! You have to continue it!!! Your story is so unique and diffrent!! The story line is great especially compared to all the other chessy stories out there!! So i beg you to please continue the story!! I have to know what happens next!! I'm on the edge of my chair!! LoL
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 01:37 CDT
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silva is so cute! i wish she was kagomes though. that would be sweet. please update soon. this story is really great. excellent job.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... what happens now that naraku and the bad guys are gone... what about the spell... will kagome be going home... what will inuyasha do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Silva is ADORABLE! But, I hate what's happened to Inuyasha. I really hope that there's some way to save him. After all he's been through, it just seems so unfair that he'll have to die in the end. I really hope you consider giving him a reprieve. His death would break Kagome and Silva's hearts!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why was Inuyasha being so mean to Kagome? He should be grateful to her!!! I'm glad that Silva is doing better!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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