| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: sare On: October 04, 2006 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoutly love this story, and I think that you are an amazing author. I can't wait till you up date the next chapter, again, your story is amazing.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 17:59 CDT
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OMG NO! This story is getting so friggin good! I cannot wait to know what happens now...whoo...she found his heart, hopefully there won't be too much drama following with this...but *sigh* I bet there is...lol. UPDATE SOON!!! =D
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 12:46 CDT
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.....updaaaaaaaate sooooooooon! That was a bad ending! pleaaase update!!! NOW!
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Title: A Very Impressive & Astonishing Mystery
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! You have done an excellent job writing it. I love the way you portray the characters--Inuyasha, Seshomaru, and Sango especially. I think you're right; chapter 14 did seem kind of choppy. However, I was so happy that you finally updated that it didn't really bother me. I appreciate that you are going back and fixing grammar mistakes, though truthfully, if I had to pick one or the other, I'd rather you write new chapters. You're doing a lot better on the grammar though, so good job! Very creative plot, and you somehow managed to create a completely 'alternate universe' theme without making the characters completely OOC. (Amazing!) Very impressive. I look forward to reading futher chapters!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: angels destiny times doom On: October 02, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good! i loved ur chapter and this is an very original and unique story. Please keep writing it i truely want to read it through to the end. Laterz!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! she found it, but you aren't going to make this easy to give it back to him are you? Man, I just hope that he take and go back to his old self. Well update soon and keep doing what you do best, making great stories.
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Title: AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 01:46 CDT
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Ya just frustrated the hell out of me but I still love ya and the story. I can't wait for the next update you're doing a wonderful job in the set-up of the story albeit it's killing us. Smooches.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Can't wait for more. I wonder what's going to happen now that Kagome has found Inuyasha's heart.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 17:41 CDT
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WOW! Kagome found Inuyasha's heart!! What is she gonna do? Who's Ayala? The girl in the picture i bet..is she like Inuyasha's daughter or something? What is INUYASHA gonna do? If english is your sencond language then what is your first? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~*~*Ookami Hime Suriya*~*~
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great story!!! Can't wait for the updates. Don't make us wait to long for them : )
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Title: hmmmm....
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is still my favorite thus far, but the spelling mistakes a tad ummmm... what's the word? I dunno it's friday and i already turned off my brain lol! Keep up the coolness! Ha Ha!
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Reviewed By: bblackdahlia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The title really drew me in to read your story, and I'm glad I did. The idea is wonderful, as is the plot. I'm really interested to see where you go with the rest of the story. Keep up the good work! V.
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 23:05 CDT
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i LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is my favoret story! i hope u get the next chapter up soon so i can get some more clues i have an idea of who that silvered haired girl is
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Reviewed By: InuFanOne On: September 17, 2006 12:31 CDT
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Please stop sending out fake update notification emails. I've gotten about 20 in the last day. You do it a lot even though you don't really update very often and it is very annoying, especially when you do it repeatedly in one day. It just makes me want to take you off my favorites list and forget about your story.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 11:45 CDT
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Eeeeh! I got an email saying you added a new chapter! You didn't add a chapter! T__T Please update soon!
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