| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't tell me that this is the second to last chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!!!! wow. perfect....
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! JORDAN DIED Thats not cool!!! but the story is! Write More Please
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 02:27 CDT
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**Tears**awww goodbye Jordan you'll be missed. Damn, Naraku has Kagome that evil bastard!! Inuyasha just has to get to her in time, I know Kagome has more strength and power in her than any of them think. Will Sesshomaru make an appearance? Excellent job on this chapter,hope it isn't another month before the next one (pouting) Love ya, keep up the good work.
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Title: JORDAN
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOO and still no fluff i mean but great chapter what a cliff hanger please bring more chapters
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:10 CDT
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Great Chapter! Loved it, im dying in suspense now >< what happens to Kagome?? I need to know!! - anyways, you made a few spelling errors: saying one word when you meant the other, using the present tense when you meant the past tense, etc. but other then that I love the chapter, can't wait for the next one!!! ~Ookami Hime Suriya
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... sad that jordan died... and now naraku has kagome as his sacrifice... hope inuyasha gets to kagome in time... seems that the story is almost coming to an end... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 11:37 CDT
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Whoa!! Now this was an incredible chapter!! It gave me chills. And I am NOT exaggerating. ANd I almost cried, Jordan was a favorite. And do not know how I missed how important Inuyasha's daughter was. Well great job. Will be definitly waiting for next chapter. =D
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! But... You killed Jordan!! I know, I know... was like "coming" but... I liked her so much. WOW, and now what? Would they be strong enough? Next chapter is going to be hell... Really love this story, a lot! It has a wonderful plot and never know where are you taking us on your next chapter or what the outcome would be. Keep going, thank you so much for this update -was missing it terribly- and thanks for sharing it with us!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. But, MAN, I hate that Jordan died. She was a really cool character. But, you definitely sent her out with a bang. She kicked much butt in this one AND managed to keep Naraku from getting what he wanted in the end. I ahte that she's gone, but if she had to die, she died giving Naraku all he wanted....and then some. I look forward to seeing ehat you come up with next.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 09:13 CST
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Great chapter, as always! I can't wait to find out what world Kagome wants to live in. It would be cool if she could travel between both worlds so she wouldn't have to choose. Please update soon!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You stopped no fair!!!!! great story I hope inuyasha and Kagome get together and have a baby of there own
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Title: yaa
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:26 CST
Comment/Review:
woohoo another chapter to desert rose but i was hoping for romance before they left i mean come on they might never come back. but anyways good chapter cant wait for the next one ya codac out
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Title: Finally.
Reviewed By: Something Good! On: February 02, 2008 22:50 CST
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Ji-an, I know you stated that right now 'Desert Rose' is your least favorite to write, but its my favorite to read! It was honestly the 1st fanfic I had ever read and I fell completely in love with it. I love the desert contrasting the formal fertile land of Japan, I love the AU of the Inuyasha story, I'm mesmerized by the relationship between Kagome & Inu, i LOVE his lil daughters, and I love to hate your version of Naraku. I was estatic to find an update of the fantastical story. Please don't stop writing it! Every aspect, attribute, and thrill of this story is worth it. Thank you so much for writing it. Much luck! ~Cait
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