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| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 ] | Title: THIS IS SO COOL!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so amazing, Your idea is just absolutly genius! You make einstein look retarted! I really like inuyasha's desciption is simply yummy *drools all over keyboard* Please Please write more, this story is ver very addictive, by the way what color is kagome's eyes in your fic, in some they are blue, and other they are chocolate brown, forgive me if you already told, I can be stupis at times ah please fogive me for my stupidity and bluntness master! Anyways update soon!!!!
| Title: Niiice
Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the idea! It was a little vague, though, and it was hard to picture some of Kagome and Inu-Yasha's movements. Other times I could totally see what Kagome was doing (Ooooh! This sucks, I'm going to DIE IN THE DESERT! ;_;). Lol. I'm not sure if you've said it, but is it supposed to be like Arabian deserts or a more Fantasy-oriented kind of place? Well super-duper job, and I'm excited to read more! Over and Out, ~Broken Dreams
| Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should write a litle more, it's pretty interesting (and great clothes for Inuyasha BTW! ANGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL!) *fangirl squeal*.
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