| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder where Kagome can find Inuyasha's heart? And I think that girl, that is in the picture, is I guess Inuyasha's sister or apart of him that is missing? Well I have to find out in the next chapter. Hope you update soon. And keep on, keep on.
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Title: YEA!
Reviewed By: Karen Angelica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:54 CDT
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Awesome! But so incredibly cruel! You just left all the readers hanging like that! How could you?! Anyways, I can't wait for your next update! Great job on this latest chapter! Catch ya later!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:20 CDT
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Argh!! What is up with that painting?? And Inuyasha not having a heart?? So much, I don't understand, I can't wait to read more to figure it all out. Please update soon!!! =D
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Title: Awesome work!
Reviewed By: Karen Angelica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give you a 10+ I would! I love your story! You are doing a great job! It's refreshing to read AU fanfics like this one! The whole time I keep hoping that Kagome keeps her virginity! LOL! Crazy I know...But not knowing makes it very angsty! I love it! And yes, you deserve a lot of reviews! If you have any time left in your schedule...Do you think you can come and read my story? "The Demon's Blackmailed Bride." Inu/Kag romance fic and is well, exactly how the title sounds...Kag's blackmailed by Inu and well yeah...Anyways, awesome story and I can't wait for more! I wonder if this is gonna be like an Escaflowne ending! Anyhow, terrific chapters! Talk to ya later!
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Reviewed By: the really weird all women demon clan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! it is extremely well thought out and is very creative. IT is a story that you can not wait to see what happens next! The only problem was minor spelling problems. like solders...i think you mean soilders but i might be worng. update soon!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey I like this story its nice. Hope you update soon.
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Title: Rikku-chan
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story it's really great and I can't wait to read more..and OMG INUYASHA..sigh..sry random image of inu popped into my head..so newho I can't wait for u to update I luv it I luv it I luv it!!!! ~Inuyashafanaticlmv (aka; rikku-chan)
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Title: Interesting... (ch1)
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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very interesting tetsusaiga is replacing the well- so what is Inu Yasha going to use as a sword? or is he still gonna be able to use it? and Kagome was happy to go out with Hojo? Well it makes sense I guess, but now that she met InuYasha, Hojo will probably sem totally lame-ass. good. heheh
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 10:50 CDT
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Still enjoying this story muchly! I don't know why, but I didn't get a notification that you had updated, so I was pleasently surprised during a leasurly perusal of fanfics. :) You did a great job with this story, I understand your worry with sounding like an instruction manual, but I think you did a pretty good job with what you had to do. I sounded like a real conversation and info was spread out over time, so that helped. Keep up the hard work!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Udate soon!!
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 13:32 CDT
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hay i really liked this i hope u update soon so i can find out what happens
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! I'll make a suicide if you don't! Seriously!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
put your worrying to rest! i thought this was a GREAT chapter and there doesn't need to be a battle every chapter think of whos reading, mostly girls, who tend to not need as much fighting lol. I really like how their relationship is developing they are so cute thank god inuyasha isn't shy like he usually is or they'd never get anywhere because she is so innocent! update soon and don't stress about it being a good chapter because i've yet to see you mess up!
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Reviewed By: glass thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 14:22 CDT
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i really love your story, funny i've seen it up a few times but never thought to read it. now i'm glad i did, it's one of my new favorite stories. keep up the good work and congrads on graduating, college is fun you'll love it.
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Title: Meow...
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more I read this the more addicted I get! chap. 9 was good, very good, only a few errors, like saying dessert instead of desert, etc. OMG! I cannot believe the whole host thing, and then Naraku is using Kagome! Is Kagome going to betray Inuyasha?!? NOOOOOOOOO! And WOW! Miroku and Sango are so intimate O_O WOW! Well, keep up the good work! And update asap! ASAP!!!!
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