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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be funny if the "black thorn of the briar" was something for Kagome's world (something that we haven't killed off yet)(or even more funny something that grows like a weed here). I really live this chapter. I was just thinking today (while in between reading the latest chapter and doing housework) that the InuYasha riding on his horse in the white robes make me think of Aladdin. I hope you don't leave this story.... i hope that you finish it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so the action has started... will kagome find out about inuyasha's condition... what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, I loved the latest chapter. You have a way of weaving the plot and creating such vivid pictures. Kagome's strength is reassuring and I love how you illustrated her powers. I'm anxious to read about the next part of the invasion! And will Inuyasha & Kagome create the ultimate host-bond? *waggles her eyebrows pervertedly* Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! Kagome is sooo cool!! Update soon please and keep up the wonderful work!! ^_^ P.S. I know your getting tired of this story, but please don't give up on it!! It's amazing!! I'll wait however long it takes for you to come out with the next chapter to read this story!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Eartha (not signed in) On: February 02, 2008 08:49 CST
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I'm sorry you've been having such a hard time, but I'm glad that you began writing this story again. It really is an amazing work. Very complex. I'm really looking forward to seeing this story to the end, so please try your hardest to finish it. Cheer up! You should be proud of yourself to know that you are a great writer!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. As I much as I love fluff, I didn't even miss it this time. And that says A LOT. You are VERY good with action scenes, and I really love your plot line and attention to detail. I hope that you don't give up on writing because you are an excellent writier. And I look forward to reading more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 04:18 CST
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Although, it's the first time I write you a review been enthusiastic about this story since the moment I found it. It's a different idea and a very original too. It's amazing to see how you grow as a writer along the developing of the same. I'm sad that the end is coming although at the same time happy because will know how things will turn out to be. Really, am enjoying it a lot and already read it now and then again. I will miss it as much I missed the updates! LOL Thank for this chapter and for sharing it with us. Thank you again for this wonderful piece.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha is spending time with silva now... and kagome too... wonder what will kagome choose... will inuyasha really die from the poison... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 01:11 CST
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OMG!! that was a fantastic chapter!! can you please update soon!! that chapter was amazing. great story. i love how sweet silva is! great job!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*dances* Oooh, I was so excited when I was notified that you updated with a new chapter. Have I mentioned how much I LOVE Silva's character? You've really captured her child-like nature and developed it into an insightful and playful character. And you plot and twists with your story lines-- fantastic! Every time I read it, I can picture it all in my head as if a movie were being played. I DO hope there will be more romance between Inuyasha and Kagome. Not to mention more of your great battle scenes! You are a truly imaginative writer, my dear! Thanks for all fo your hard work.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I love this story soooo much!! keep up the amazing work and update really soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 12:46 CST
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I think its funny how I was just thinking about this story this morning and BAM I go online and there is a new chapter. Anywho I think this wasnt reallly all sappy and emotional like you think. I think you had a good blend. Plus any feelings that they, especially Kagome, are reasonable. Im looking forward to the next chapters to come. Hopefully alot of action, a little decision making and some truth. lol =D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chpater. The reunion between Inuyasha and his daughter was sweet. But, Kagome has some tough decisions to make....her family or Inuyasha and his world. I guess her choice would be easier if Inuyasha would reveal his true feelings for her. But, I know why he hesistates. He literally lost his heart from the pain of losing love once.....and, to futher complicate matters, he may not have long to live (I REALLY hope that there is some way to save him!) So, I can see why he wouldn't want to "burden' Kagome with his feelings when he may soon be gone. And let's not forget that naraku is still hanging over their heads, too. There's a LOT to consider. I just hope that EVERYONE survives it.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 01:21 CST
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i loved this chapter it was so good i cant wait for the next one
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Title: Please Write More
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE A BONE TO PICK WITH ABOUT THIS STORY IS IS... AMAZING. Wow inuyasha and Silva are finally together. now that's cool she was so scared when sesshomaru came to see her and she was afriad then after he left she said he's pretty wow. and kagome finding inuyasha all alone in the dark at night I tought she'd go out there and Someone would try to rape her or naroku would kidnapp her again and inuyasha came to help her and then so see Silva. But the Ending made me Cry my eyes out! it was so cute! Please Write more! T_T
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