| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: bloodQueen_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i love this story!!!its soooo awesome!!!! dont forget to keep writing!!!!u sooo totally ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Edie-E On: September 13, 2006 15:21 CDT
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I don't understand why Kagome slapped him and fights him. They've been together for a long time and she knows he cares for her and she seems to care for him. She's acting stupid. She's been sharing a bed with him for weeks or months but she's acting like they just met and he's a stranger that touched her. At this point, her prudish behavior just looks immature and silly. I didn't like this chapter.
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Reviewed By: wha? On: September 12, 2006 17:13 CDT
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why would shy want to go back NOW? isnt she s'posed to be looking for Inuyasha's heart?
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Reviewed By: jellyhead2004 On: September 12, 2006 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I notice that you have a LOT of word usage problems. You have grammar and spelling issues as well. Is English your second language? Maybe you should get a beta reader who is familiar with English to help you. The story itself is not bad and I think you have a decent plot going so far, but it is distracting to see all the mistakes. Ask for someone with good English skills to look over your work for you. Just spelling a word correctly doesn't mean you are using the word correctly. I hope this helps.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter your story is just great. can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Amazona dos Elementos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update...NOW
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Title: :DDDD
Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: September 05, 2006 00:21 CDT
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Eheheheheh...Inuyasha-sama is so kawaii ^^;; Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Arenia On: August 30, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I love the story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
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Title: WOOT!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i'm like the person that wrote before me, i like sess/kag storys, but for right now, or actually, whenever i read your story, i'm a inu/kag! lol, keep up the uber work! I'M LOVE'N IT LOL! later ^_^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: WEAVER4512 On: August 25, 2006 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY I AM NOT AWAYS FOR INUYASHA & KAGOME. I AM BIG SESSHOUMARU & KAGOME FAN. BUT THIS STORY ROCKS BIG TIME. SO PLESE UPDEAT SOON, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, AND GIVE US MORE WOWS.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I really like the mistery in this story. I wonder if that painting is his twin, and the missing heart thing well I think someone used a spell or something and lock it away with his twin. Well update soon and keep on, keep on.
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 23:30 CDT
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hay i really like this one though i hope we get some answers soon please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story i've been lookin for a new story to read and i was lucky to come by this one. Well i hope u keep it up and cant wait for the next chap so update soon. Cant wait
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Title: oh!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better, only i feel that u rushed chapter 10. Please update as soon as you can! Have a great summer! ^_~
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 04:22 CDT
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please up-date soon i really want to know what happens next. i would write more but i'm really tyred sorry:(
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